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peep it
doin pushups in the sand, i look at myself as a man/ with the physical manifestation of the grim reaper in my right hand/ call it toast, u can call it a gat or a mak/ u'll meet it if ur trap spit sumn to make me react/ i'm a gangsta nigga, so u can catch me totin an uzi/ call me a 'blak nigger' i be quik to retreat the chamber smoothly/ let the gunpowder set then let up 50 missiles out my pistol/ rupturin ur cerrebellum so the smallest of your worries is scar tissue/ in my hood we all carry arms, find sum heat real warm in my palm/ fuk around and lil meesha and ray-ray's daddy gone be gone/ truss me the ak-47 be quik to relieve you/ and i'mma retrace ur steps so i can eliminate each one of ur ppl/ lemme change it up its crystal clear us familia cats dnt feel fear/ u runnin ur mouf dawg? u cud easily push a wheelchair/ my rhymes wreck lives like the pure white i supply/ niggas chillin in bathrooms, snortin like vacuums/ out here it rains hollows, but if u rock a vest u prepared/ an if ur underwear wet comin offa the set, then u scared/ u cud go ahead an bite my lines but that aint gone help/ cos i write sick so u betta fuckin insure yourself/ make money is what i was told me and the benji's familiar/ i rep la familia, misstep i'm killin ya/ its nothin this is what u wud call a real keystyle off top homeboy y'all stay up and rate 4 reel
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i'm finna stop this shit cos i jus noticed this verse is reel week/........tru tru tru
if u wanan freepost then go to fuckin cypher......mmm need a 100 posts eh sounds like this might be some one's second RB account........... |
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you really should post a whole verse that isn't a mix of played out topic and wackness....just my thoughts...
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This was fuckin whack........................Dont be posting short ass shit like dat here........
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i straightened it up i was buggin b4
rate it now all u niggas wid n e intelligence
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2 Tyma AKA Boy wonder Last edited by 2 tyma : 05-23-03 at 08:28 PM. |
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upp............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ..there mus b 1 cat felin dis
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fuckin whack.....Lets battle so i can just whoop yo ass....
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see, this is soemthin where u are only focusing on the end of the phrases so u can rhyme wit da next line....Thats dumb becuz then half of ur shit doesnt even make sense. Pick a topic, stick to it, pick a flow, stick to it, (unless u change it up wit lettin people know) Then your rhymes will come along much more easier, stop focusin on the end, focus on the whole thing at once. I'm out...Payce
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see i'm feelin that u gave me criticism in a reel way but i dnt c wat u mean. my rhymes flow and i aint never finna use a dictionary 2 do dat. my bars and lines r just like errbodyv elses so i dont c where ur comin from. respect tho
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