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05-30-03, 05:39 PM
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"Summer Time"
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I just wrote this out of boredom...But please tell me what you think...
The summer breeze flows through your hair Running down the road, without a care Feeling the sand beneath your toes The temperature in the highs, not the lows Feeling the sun upon your skin Glad that it is summer time once again Looking out at the waves Splashing into rocks and hidden caves Spending all your time at the beach The sun giving your hair a natural bleach Going out to hang with friends Picking up the summers new trends Laying outside under the sun Watching the younger ones have fun Wearing Skirts and shorts Being with family at local resorts Enjoying the water and swimming All the spring grass now needs trimming The neighbors flowers have been planted Your summer wishes are being granted Schools out and summer has began Laying under the sun and getting a tan Not caring if you have a dollar or a dime Your just happy that It's Summer Time |
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05-30-03, 06:08 PM
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IP:
nice to see somethin light around here, pleasant diversion, good piece...
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05-30-03, 06:16 PM
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IP:
Thank you for your response! I appreciate it
 ...peAce |
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05-31-03, 08:11 AM
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BANNED For Being A Dick
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Yeah...No More "Im Fucked Up" Verses...They Are Pestering
This Is They Type Of Shit I Like To Read On A Saturday Mornin' Lol |
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06-02-03, 04:22 AM
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IP:
i feel your shit cause u got real shit i liked this one to i actually get to see a brighter side of you, dont change your style though,nice drop keep spittin baby girl. peace.
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06-02-03, 07:21 PM
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Tampons are expensive
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*yay!*...what a great poem....i mean wow a happy one...cuz ya know most of all the poems here are about suicide...being fucked up...unrequited love mostly....lost...but this one..when u read it ..it would just makes ur day...nice one...
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<br><br><center>- Shiznit - - Tampons are still expensive - - That's a Fact - </center> |
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06-03-03, 02:17 AM
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Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
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IP:
Ahh! The light! It's burning my eyes!!!
Uhh... but seriously, it's nice to see something change the pace. I've never really liked the summer, but you make it seem so great. ~Shalom~ |
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06-03-03, 07:02 PM
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IP:
hehe,i dont really like summer either but this is nice.there's always that special something that gives someone a relief from all the sorrows.i guess you found yours;p
peace |
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06-04-03, 08:00 PM
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IP:
i could releate to that one that was tight
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06-04-03, 09:25 PM
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IP:
good job ma!! tired of all that depression shit..good to have sum upliftin shit...keep spittin...fo' real....ill shit.....peace...
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06-06-03, 01:30 PM
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IP:
Thank you all for the responses. I have never really thought about this topic, seeing as many people find it 'boring' lol...Well I appreciate all the responses. Sorry I haven't been posting much lately!
Thankz!!peAce |
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06-06-03, 04:05 PM
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IP:
it was a plesent and relaxing little piece nice work
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06-09-03, 02:12 PM
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IP:
Thankz
peAce |
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06-09-03, 03:14 PM
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IP:
This poem brought a
*SmIle* to my face!!..cute lil poem gurl nice way to lift everyones spirits from all tha really sad poems that have been posted lately. But yea it was a cool poem...pz and much luv |
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06-14-03, 11:32 AM
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IP:
Thank you for the comment...
peAce |
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