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"Deep Dark Secrets" Topical.. Mad Man Peep This!!
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hey Mad Man... there was some confusion about the due dates last week from my part and some from Bruklors part.... anyway you can open that battle up and see who won based on both verses being posted.... Bruklor said he was cool with it
Dear Mom & Dad: sorry it had to come to this but i got something to say i love you both but i have to go, i just can't stay im going away and i dont think i am coming back sorry i had to leave this way, please dont over-react the fact is, i cant take either one of you anymore at times i think you are both simply evil to the core i just dont understand what all the hate and anger is for its like you take pleasure in knocking on the devil's door you are at odds with the world, always trying to even the score what makes you think you are so fucking pure!?!? is it because, your skin is white & lite in pigment?? it aint right to spite others like there just an imagination figment this is some sick shit... and dont think i dont know about the KKK your ties w/ the arian nation that you take place in day to day the guns and ammo you got stored away waiting to spray all the phone calls and converstaions about how you want to slay every other race & creed.. whether it be black, jews or gays and how you cant wait to see there faces when they bleed i just cant conceive how i could be related as your seed that is why i have to leave, with the girl i see frequent O you didnt know!?! thats cause i didnt dare speak it it was hard not to leak it, but now i dont care... you can peek in hope you see the love & lust when you peep it cause i want to hear the disbelief and horror when you shreek it mad cause you had no idea i could quietly sneek this and i hope you die when thinking of me licking each of her bodily features im marrying a beautiful black woman.... I Love My ~ Deep "Dark" Secret~ |
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That was pretty good.
LoL, we both kind of played with the whole "dark" thing, thought that might happen, it worked out well I think. You and your fucking endings! Pure Dopeness. Maybe I should have taken that easy win, :P HaHa joking. |
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LOL... yours was pretty nice too dawg... i now we kinda played the same theme.. and i had mine half done then i read yours and was like fuck!! but i kept going with it anyway... o well.... anyway thanks for the reply.... Peace
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This topical was dope Evovle.... I was feeling it from begining to end....
and like he said...... the ending was pure Dopeness... |
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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Fucken nice ish mun haha...Consistent throughout..Def agreed^^ That ending and the way you used the topic title for the twist was dope...Very Creative much respect and Props...Dope....
.......Pz........ |
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I like the ending was off tha chain, I liked it the whole way through
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That was really good.......I enjoyed it all................
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All feedback is appreciated
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i enjoyed and would enjoy the audio somet6ime this was hot
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Appreciated
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stayed on point,straight forward,keepin it real to how ya feel,good shit dun.1
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appreciated
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