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Old 06-05-03, 04:55 PM   #1
dreamer
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To my slain nigga

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Yo we was born in the same hospital//
slept in the same bed me on the side you in the middle//
lived the same riddle//
The same bubble //
got into the same trouble//
always togheter never apart my double//
wearing the same clothes and shoes//
fucking with the same hoes confused//
hanging with the drug pros amused//
fighting with the same style one-twos//
knocking niggas out they socks//
flocking to dope fiens selling rocks//
locking the doors to count our stocks//
Me and my nigga ran these blocks//
When his gun went off mine followed//
when the cops came rocks swallowed//
money never borrowed//
it was accepted as presents//
acted like kings but lived like peasents//
graced each other with the others prescence//
any beef came it wasnt pleasant//
Ill always be in debt your companionship never could be reimbursed//still not believing inyour death left on this earth cursed//why is it the good niggas gotta go first//
You always said the best things in life are hid//until the day we meet again ill always be lookin kid//
Rest in peace my brother, my friend, David
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Old 06-05-03, 05:38 PM   #2
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this was tight i liked this stay up
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Old 06-05-03, 05:47 PM   #3
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it was tight but it was kinda hard to flow with it cuz the lines were to short. Keep elevating It was good.
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Old 06-05-03, 05:49 PM   #4
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^^he said it perfectly...nice but ya lines were way too short

return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53270
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Old 06-05-03, 06:13 PM   #5
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Thanks for the comments ill try to make my lines longer and see how it flows. one.
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Old 06-05-03, 08:38 PM   #6
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i stopped readin right when it said u slept in tha same bed, that made me sick
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Old 06-05-03, 10:42 PM   #7
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Like tha other cats said....Ur Lines were way too short...But this drop was Nice
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Old 06-05-03, 10:53 PM   #8
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Pretty Nice..Holla At Me
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