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Mentally ill.
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This is writeen in 1st person as if i'm conversing with myself.
how long have we been locked up in it I feel the plot's up the moment the spot's up and doc's drugs finish I guess they don't see 'Pac thug image, mob-ster vintage It's been 24 hours since the cops done visit Dawg, they think we lost it, fa'real..I ain't crazy, Shady maybe...but still it's awkward to deal Locked inside giant doors and behind iron bars Re-enforced firewalls that's where they pickup my dialogues and discern 'em Hold up, here comes the nurse with the surgeon They're conversing, we're sure to get a needle squirt in the sterum..... ((Get's IV fluid and Blacks Out)) Partna' wake up, you've been asleep, dawg, for hours Judging by the shadow alignment it's time to move our feet t'ward the showers Leaky faucets and a rust covered sink, I've seen enough blood to think this place ain't safe enough for thugs, fuck the bing Every hour on the hour catz is roughed up the same It's nothing short of breathin' ether, these people fuck up ya' brain But not me, I've been here 49 hours That's twenty-eight hundred minutes since they brought me, borderline cowards Damn, I miss my service with Nextel Better more I'm never bored when there's Ruth in the next cell..... ((Blacks Out)) Add, wake up and peep fast-quick I've made up a complete tactic It's a way to break out and be free, bast'id Our 72 hours is concluding, You're making me start to lose it, We're here forever, playa', stop the confusion Remember, Central Park is a cemetary now, people are getting buried now, All thanks to the squirrels and constant laughter from that scary owl But whatever - C'mon, partna', just hear me out The minute hand is moving to the 12, in a second we'll be nearly out.. |
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Why does every1 sleep
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Banned For Biting
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Flow was good
descent content Overall 7.7 /10 10ne |
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Nice joint here...I was liking the whole first person perspective thing...creative. Upps
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Uppin
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yeah...............dat was nice..................i was feelin it........................I like the whole "first person convo" shit...........................it was hot......................8/10....................keep spittin........................
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Thanx yall
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Nice too see how creative someone is love the contend i have to say this deffinitly hot
FAM......nice drop
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