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06-12-03, 02:22 PM
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. Doper Than You.
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This Is A Hot Track....SHow Some Love.....I Expect Some Feedback......This Is My New Mic I Just Got Yesterday......GOOD Quality...
 I Love Jay Cyph!!!!!!! Hollerhttp://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/auqwurdmusic.htm One.Bye |
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06-12-03, 02:46 PM
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IP:
Thank's For The Shout Out ..
..To Bad No One Is Actually Going To Hear This . Now, Onto The Constructive Critism.. Your Flow Is Weak throughout The Whole Peice.. You Slur Most Of Your Words.. Get Up Add Emotion.. Quality As Bunz .. Content Was Alright .. Multis Came In Kind Of good at Times, But Other Then That They Was Pretty Basic Do You Really Like Me That Much, You Have To Mention Me Three Times In A Track? Quote:
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<center><b>true..</b></center> Last edited by Peril Eyes : 06-12-03 at 02:51 PM. |
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06-12-03, 03:51 PM
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IP:
u need more emotion... u also needa make ur vocalz a lil higher...
cant really comment on ur lyrics cuz i didnt understand half of it... but the hook was pretty good... |
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06-13-03, 01:56 PM
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. Doper Than You.
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IP:
Ok.....Fuck U Jay Cyph......U'r A Bitch....And I Will Make Sure To Kill U In Our Battle!!!
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06-14-03, 12:55 AM
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New to RB
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IP:
You Say I Come Half Assed..
So Be It.. I Come Half Assed And Still 10 Times Better Then You Full Force.. You've Yet To Actually Seen Me try On The Net..
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