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06-17-03, 07:02 AM | #1 | ||
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F R E E S T Y L E P O E T R Y
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Aight here we go....
Sometimes... Sometimes i wonder what life has in store Sometimes i wonder y im selfish to the core Sometimes i hate when my freinds talk to each other Sometimes i hate puttin myself in front of muhfuckers Sometimes i hate when u say i put it all on you Sometimes i hate when u say, "its me, not you" Sometimes i still catch my self wanting to say "i lu-lu-" Sometimes i get pissed off till i spray muh-fuckas Sometimes i love when im truthful and u say "yea right" Sometimes i love when we talk all night about ryhmes Sometimes i hate it when u flip urself and go to him Sometimes i wanna start war but i cant cuz its my friend Sometimes i say "maybee ill kill some one cuz jail is all i got" Sometimes i hear u think, and breathe when u speak and sudenly stop Sometimes i love you, actually ur allways on my mind Sometimes i know u can never be mine, at any time, day or night, so i tell u in ryhmes that sometimes i like u, other times i say love just to spite you, some times u make me somad when cuz u say ur ugly, other times, ur brains and ur beauty just mugs me, sometimes i rap to you, other times i avoid to snap on you, sometimes i say things other times i just try, sometimes i run over puppies with bow ties sometimes i wish that i could go back in time, and sweet talk instead of playin the friend card so ud be mine, sometimes i do get jealous and possesive, like when i bombed on that kid for sendin u love letters, sometimes i think, i shoulda stopped writing a while ago, and the reality is, i can never let you go, go go go o no.... |
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06-18-03, 01:23 AM | #2 | ||
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IP:
^^ just let shit out, didnt know it read like that....
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06-18-03, 10:51 AM | #3 | ||
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Re: F R E E S T Y L E P O E T R Y
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SUBTEXT: I either liked this piece a lot so i just posted it all. Speechless. Or more likely, i need to get my post signs up to provide some sort of compensation for my small penis... Last edited by varentao : 06-21-03 at 01:27 PM. |
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06-18-03, 11:34 AM | #4 | ||
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IP:
great freepost technique
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06-18-03, 03:11 PM | #5 | |
Light Weight
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IP:
Well Kapone, I'm the freeposter here at RB and I decided to make your thread my next victim since it looks so lonely.
I've read this a few times and didn't know if I should respond since it's a touchy subject. I liked this, like most of the other stuff you've posted. You're a good writer and I usually read what you put up here. When you write, you always do good at putting up a picture of how you feel. And it looks like you feel pretty bad in this one. I don't know what else to say about it. The whole thing was good, the content, flow, words used..all of it. It was a good read. Sometimes i hate when u say i put it all on you Sometimes i hate when u say, "its me, not you" some times u make me somad when cuz u say ur ugly, Those were the lines that I liked to most. |
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06-18-03, 04:29 PM | #6 | ||
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IP:
didnt expect that...........
uh, i just kinda wrote, hit me up on yahoo, i can do the same on a mic, i dont put thought, i just let things flow out its like that religion where u talk in toungs, i just close my eyes and type, i formatted the first linnes that started with sometimes, then the rest i was like fuck it, and started typing............... |
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06-19-03, 09:04 PM | #7 | ||
"Cuz bruk said so"
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IP:
Kapone I can relate to many of the situations described in your post. Thanks for sharing that, too many are too timid about exposing that type of flow. I think it's a great way to vent, and let some of that accumulated frustration we all have out...Props....
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06-21-03, 01:28 PM | #8 | |
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IP:
Very nice Kapone. It was raw, on the edge. Just full of emotions, that the akwardness and other flaws were over-shadowed by it..
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06-22-03, 08:30 PM | #9 | |
aka Kapone = BANNED
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IP:
it sucked a dick dude.....
sorry thats the way it is and is gunna be, i can talk a bunch of shit to you cuz ur ban, fuckin net-thug SUBTEXT: I say "it sucked a dick dude" because i know from experience.. Last edited by varentao : 06-22-03 at 09:03 PM. |
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06-22-03, 09:53 PM | #10 | ||
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IP:
^LMAO @ him and varentao's lil edit
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