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06-17-03, 02:16 PM | #1 | ||
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**Cin Laaaadin**
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heres a verse..feed bacc would be great..it sounds better in audio tho...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/youngk9music.htm "RUMBLE" but here: Fucc all tha bullshit & talkn im stompn in heavy/ im preparn tha wurld cuzz yall faggotz aint ready* & im killn 4 tha feddi, i top u off & u cough dripz/ & if u actn like a bitch, then imma treat u like a bitch* then i flip this shit & rip the game & whoz in it/ ill buss kicc-flips on ya like Jereme Rogers did it* imma gangsta in DC's u ce me and freeze/ ill snipe u out in DC wit 1 easy squeeze* ill bring ya down 2 ya knees cuzz u feeln me speak/ im fillen em up wit enuff heat 2 leave em in streetz* believe its G, 4 tha reasonz it Be/ im the hardest kid 2 rap & put holez in ure cheek* im killin this beat (oh) im killn tha weak (yea)/ drillin em wit war musicc so they feeln tha defeat* truss me, that Girl Skateboard knoccz ya noggn/ bitch aint no fuccn COMPTON!!* thass it...feedbacc please!!! 1Luv Cin Ladin
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J.Cin aka JJdaBABAY THE A-TEAM/MONEY HUNGRY www.soundclick.com/JCin6one9 Droppin June 1, 2004 Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work" (The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap) Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more... Label: The A-Team/Money Hungry Ent/Navarre Last edited by Gods Gift : 06-17-03 at 02:27 PM. |
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06-17-03, 02:24 PM | #2 | ||
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Dumb
wasnt feeling any of this except heading back to open mic |
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06-17-03, 02:28 PM | #3 | ||
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well thass coo...i NEVER do text....i juss figured..hey im bored..ill post my lyricz...like I SAID...IT SOUNDS BETTER IN AUDIO...
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J.Cin aka JJdaBABAY THE A-TEAM/MONEY HUNGRY www.soundclick.com/JCin6one9 Droppin June 1, 2004 Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work" (The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap) Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more... Label: The A-Team/Money Hungry Ent/Navarre |
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06-17-03, 02:31 PM | #4 | ||
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i dont doubt it
Just critisizing it |
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06-17-03, 02:31 PM | #5 | |
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Yo would sound better in audio most definately dawg.
Peace |
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06-17-03, 03:06 PM | #6 | |
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ewyu
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ok Cin, Ive never ead any of your shit, but here goes my analyis:
1. This is a good AUDIO piece, but not a good open mic...in open mic if you write audio shit it just sounds like your saying random shit to make i rhyme (Which is what audio is.) In open mic peeps like shit with feeling or deep thought behind it...this would be a nice piece for audio, not for open mic...but if ya put it to the beat from "X" by Xzibit, it sounds tight as fuck. ~1~ A2Z |
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06-17-03, 03:10 PM | #7 | |
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that was stupid
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06-17-03, 03:15 PM | #8 | ||
Yeah Keep Biting.
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hell yea.. this a definite audio piece.
the multis will bless the whole flow.. but in open mic.. you need a topic.. this just sounds like a freestyle (keystyle). |
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06-17-03, 03:16 PM | #9 | |
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What up dawg, I think the audio would sound pretty cool. Personally, I think the text could have been alot better. I think it's just too plain and basic. No disrespect homie. If you got time, check out my first drop on RB. Keep Elevating.
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06-17-03, 03:44 PM | #10 | |
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need alot of work dawg
but it was iight |
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06-17-03, 04:13 PM | #11 | |
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yea cin...
all of your audio shit is hott... and make this an audio track and it will be hott... -nuff said- |
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06-17-03, 05:18 PM | #12 | ||
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thancz 4 all the feedbacc...yea i juss figured id post sumthn in here....
1Luv Cin Ladin
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J.Cin aka JJdaBABAY THE A-TEAM/MONEY HUNGRY www.soundclick.com/JCin6one9 Droppin June 1, 2004 Smigg Dirtee Presents The A-Team "Team Work" (The Real A-Team is: Silas aka Smigg Dirtee, C.Gigolo, JBoog, Kilo, JCin, Steezo, Bandit, L Cap) Featuring: Luni Coleone, Jay Tee, MC Eiht, I-Rocc, B-12, 12 Guage Shottie, Jack D, Macnifacent and many more... Label: The A-Team/Money Hungry Ent/Navarre |
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06-17-03, 10:56 PM | #13 | |
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audio stylez needed cause it comes across as dumbass written
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06-17-03, 10:57 PM | #14 | |
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not hatin just statin
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