This is just a little taste of the real, most of y'all don't know nothin about this.

We struggle for necessities/1
splurge on the Lexus keys/2
Throw some rims on my truck, all the girls I’m a bust/3
Never thinking about threes days from now, what will catch-up/4
When it rains it pours sometime it never let up/5
We got sneaky niggaz that will bang ya girl/6
It takes two, so you gotta blame ya girl/7
Minimum wage is a joke, do what you gotta do to smoke/8
We hustle for trucks while they cop the boats/9
Secrets of investment kept from the ghetto/10
They string us along like their name is Japetto/11
The credit game is modern day segregation/12
That’s why we worship cash as a representation/13
They even brain washed our parents/14
Who tell us to go to college, education transparent/15
We make the institutions rich, and we can’t find no job/16
Or laid off, no job and the loans never get paid off/17
40 thou and my man made it out, degree with power/18
His first job had him make 9 dollars an hour/19
I fail to understand the logic,/20
Apply for the position and prejudice will stop it/21
That’s why I rather make millions on innovation/22
How could you bust yo back while CEO vacationin/23
But they got us smoked out and lovin it/24
Husslin for rent by shovelin shit???/25
I really don’t think so, so I’ma grab the nine/26
And the next thing I take, I believe it’s already mine/27


Don't bite my shit!!!!

whats wit the /2, /3 etc..?, i thought people only done that in battle threads?

anyway, the flow i thought was a little bit off, choppy in some places. Vocab was allright, but could do with soem tweaking here and there, but still it was aight....

yeah you right I just wanted to get somethin up here. My shit ain't really built for the net. I write according to my style & a beat. Folks on here are just the opposite. Good lookin out Holla

rhythmic just about said it all. im not sayin it was bad, but it wasn't great either....
peep my drops: the lonesome(need a friend) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60643

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