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Old 07-04-03, 07:44 PM   #1
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I'll Look At You

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I'll look at you and tell you what I see
Something that's carmel complected
Sweet like chocalate
I see you and I'm ready to melt
Because you look that good
Tall like a tree
With fire red rows
Eyes that are heavy like weights
And a smile that brightens a day
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Old 07-04-03, 09:05 PM   #2
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Short But To The POint...Feels Like I Being Spoken To Forreal
Neve..Non The Less This Was Okay
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Old 07-05-03, 01:41 AM   #3
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haha nice poetry girl, short n sweet n cute
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Old 07-05-03, 05:54 AM   #4
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Heh.

Yeah, this was short, kind of to the point, and cute. I hate to use the word 'cute', but tis true, tis true...(!)..

...maybe could've been compressed a bit better. You know, for so few words and lines. But then again, it seems heartfelt. So it doesn't matter..

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