newb ere but says hes got a record of 9-0 on another site!

15 lines max
no crew/d ridin/hatin votes
no feedin

u spit first!

we goin first to 5 an 3-0 is KO?~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I 'l post when i get time in a bite~

Alrite listen up,

Jshook! Nigga u bout 2 be shook up by my determination, your ass a callaboration which causin enormous confrontation//
Rencarnation the only hope 4u wen this battle reaches its last post, I’ll knock u from coast 2 coast n u’d still be thick enough 2 boast//
U 0-0 n u think u can beat me, dawg go n battle a newb if u wanna a free-be//
Cos all u getting ere is “sharp” lines cutting up your exisistance, the difference between me n u is I need no assistance--//
--puttin words together, you’ve never ad 2 weather through a storm like this, with every punch u miss, while I neva miss a diss//
jshook don’t look now but u beta duck, cos these punches “comin” faster than wen I make ya bitch suck//
from now on cat neva walk alone, cos nxt time u in the zone im gonna put more holes in ya head than a “micraphone”//
beta “wish upon a star” or at ya nxt birthday, cos wen im finished ere ya only memory of life will be your own “birth-day”//
once again typically rulin a battle lyrically, u wanna battle physically? Seriously Giv me the place n I’ll beat your ass directly//
im a “vet in practice” n u my patient, but u a cat wivout “9 lives” cos that myth is ancient//
we goin one on one nigga, head 2 head, u just read this verse n ya heart stopped dead//
mislead? Always u neva on track, n you’ll neva be on a track, except 4 a train one wen ya bones will go crack, crack sorry nigga I just broke your back//
now im bout 2 finish this, but im goin on a high like I’ve just smoked a “joint”, it was a joint dissision 2 battle but I think u got my point!

Alrite uppin this y’all!!!

now u dawg, thought i'd spit first ad nothin 2 do!!!

**no beef afta , its all in the battle playa**

~~J Shook’s drop~~

Now I’m verse’n this cocky lil bitch named “dw”/ my rap records bout to change to 10-0 cuz of you/ u ain’t a rapper, u prolly a cheerleader like George W*/ I’ma destroy you/ make people be like “dw” WHO//*( George W. Bush was a cheerleader)

Feelin the heat from my rhymes drenches you in perspiration/ U gasp’n for air now that da game is at a higher elevation/ no crew participation / sry your lines aren’t hitten at the right location/ but hold up I’ma Knock You Out, ya betta get some medication//

Make ya sweat, you develop the “Chills” an a “Feva”/ your dick so small ya have ta jack off wit a tweezer/ I’m gonna leave wit a win, so Bitch c-ya/ I guess you just decided to spit first I aint need no breather//

You survivan this lyrical fury an onslaught, theirs no way/ I’ma assassinate, an manipulate, you in every way/ the way I’ma kill you they gonna make this shit a National Holiday//

I can’t stand your rhymes, they makes me gag like “two men kissing”, with you I don’t know were to start dissing, your flows on “Milk Cartons” it’s Missing//

Spitten in a fearless rage, watchin your lyrics diteriate/ playin games wit your mind, while I control your fate/ people can stipulate/ but I’ll always hold the power to manipulate/ then I cripple you just to complicate//

Releasin mad crazy punch lines, make you oblivious/ rapid fire from the “Gak” keeps spitten continuous/ please stop rappin you suck I’m serious/ ya betta step down or I’ll blaze you I’m furious/ you bout to lose bitch, so how you liken this?//

Engulfed in flames mutha fucka, burnt in the 5th degree/ knock ya off your feet like *Heniesy*/ I just want the MC’s/ an viewers to see/ that they should VOTE 4 ME/ not this pussy//

~uppin for votes~............................................ ...........

***hit this up***

flo-shook
word play-shook
multi-shook
mechanics-both
enjoyment-shook

final verdict-shook....very nice shit....

return the favor wit an honest vote here..thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=63797

thanks space ~~ hit the pole.................................~
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Uppin for VOTES

UPPIN for votes.............Space.....hit the pole .................................................. ...............aight UPPIN

yeh nice verse there but 10-15 lines i think u smashed that abit! never mind though,

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yea each paragraph sequence =a bar. .cuz i'm rhymeing the same sound through the paragraph..

sry for the miss understandin

vote people............................................ ........make shore you hitthe poles.........................

thanks~ J Shook

whoa, oh yeah he has a 9-0 record. very tight verse with nice wordplay and flow. dw was also tight but unfortunetly hes versing the real thing. nice work jshook.
vote- jshook

return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64197

ayo can yall vote on dis battle please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64114

thanks for the vote...... im really up 2-0 but 1-0 cuz the first cat did't hit the pole.............................................. ................
..............Uppin for votes

J-shook'd it, nigga made him look
dw is a slave to apage inhis rhyme book

J-shook too this one no doubt, better punches son