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No Reach
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Graspin nothin like you've no arms,
Masterin only not bein able to harm/ Blastin nothin but your own chances, Degradin and now you've grown rancid/ The partin of hopes phaze your brain, You haven't grazed but grazed your name/ Only hopes not the page have blazed, Slopes more than a straight line placed/ Connectin your mind only to confusion, Distressin cuz rhymes are dis-illusioned/ Blessin only hate upon surroundin peeps, Caressin rap but get 1 base, neva complete/ Like doin a puzzle with half the pieces missing, You can't hustle like your dis-able and tripping/ Aspirations is everything but there no delivery, Lines drempt to be dope but the smoked in reality/ Message > >> >>>Trying to reach but whiten like bleech, cuz you can't connect, ghost that can't reserrect/ You're down yet ain't counted for, existence was't known cuz you were floored/ Walked all over!!! |
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now i know y u got no replies..this is pretty wack..in all honesty..i was wonder n the whole time what u were go n for..whats the real point of this..flow was so so..metas were..................and u had no multis..im gonna assume ur farly new to this..if not..hmmm..seems like u tried hard to make this a real intelectual piece..just didnt come out right..wit a few changes..this could be hot..
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