Yeah...i think the titLe is quickie...shit is sooo low quality...and fLow is kinda off(loL even missing some ad libs)....just some shit i threw together and wanted feed on...so yeah drop your feed...loL dont go easy naw'mean...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/salthekingmusic.htm

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univerSaL hiatus

hey you!
your worthless like pre-owned autos...
hahaha

PNEUMATIC...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/saltheking.htm

wow....where can i begin....your deliver is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay off, and ur flow is horrible dawg.....u have no flow what so ever.....your lyrics could definitely improve and your doubles need help......u need crazy elevation, but keep doin your thing....it takes time to improve, just be patient and find yourself in beat....OnE




I'm Ghost...

word, thanks! fa sho! upping!

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univerSaL hiatus

hey you!
your worthless like pre-owned autos...
hahaha

PNEUMATIC...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/saltheking.htm

i dont think you are allowed to critique any more tracks i post on this site....thats the new rule...thanks for the click though...

yeah...flow was way off....um....wow...where can i begin.....i dont really know...so i wont

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..ghost...

...lol aight since when are movie critics actors...yeah fa sho man, if i wasnt new to this so much, my hopes of elevating wouLd be crushed....i appreciate the feed...sorry for upping this again..but i didnt wanna freepost...from now on i'll just edit this...

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univerSaL hiatus

hey you!
your worthless like pre-owned autos...
hahaha

PNEUMATIC...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/saltheking.htm

too low on the mic not much presense at all. pretty much all of your problems are the same as the ones i have. it's some some alright lyrics but needs alot of work

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

well theres def room for improvement n shit but for being in ya early stages of ya steez u def have potential.. stay focused,dedicated n just keep at it n u'll elevate in no time yo.. this overall wasent WACK.. it wasent ground breakin either but its all an experience dawg.. regardless, keep droppin.1

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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did//
Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo //
in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"//

...thanks for the feed upping..

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univerSaL hiatus

hey you!
your worthless like pre-owned autos...
hahaha

PNEUMATIC...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/saltheking.htm