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love
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It comes to us in many fashions
Personifying endless passions Ignoring gender, creed and race Just look around, it's EVERY PLACE! You'll find it in a baby's giggle And also in a puppy's wiggle In April's rain when flowers grow In winter nights in quiet snow ~LOVE~ It's heard in songs throughout the land And felt when someone takes your hand Reflected in your dear ones' eyes When gifts are given for surprise It does not judge, condemn or scare But cradles gently, showing care So hear it! see it! touch it! feel! Avail your senses, it's VERY REAL It's here within the big and small The fat, the thin, the short, the tall It's what makes life worth living for Never enough! there's ALWAYS more! The human being can't do without And this i KNOW without a doubt So please say thanks to God above For giving us this thing called "LOVE" |
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umm it was decent but it sounded really Dr. Suess umm i dont know whut much else to say except it sounded cliche and cheesy elevation is key, also read the friggin rules for the forum your only allowed 2 poems on the first page, you just fuck the rules and post 3 at one time with a 4th sitting near the bottom, "be smart dont be a retard" only tryna help, 1luv.
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IP:
Read the reasons of closure on your other piece.
CLOSED for now. |
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Re-opened. Will comment on it later.
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dat shit was funny infamous but on da real dat poem was tight
(even whatn infamous said lol)still ya poem even aplys to dick heads like dat "IT comes to us in many fashions personifying endless passions,ignoring gender creed an race,just look around its every place" love in infamous's twisted fashion an passion was from anger in a sense is still a form of love an even at da end of his post he showed u another "fashion" of love he ended it with 1luv like i said tight poem an what ever response u get from anybody it will still be classified as love |
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tight piece,it was emotional and strung together well keep droppin,peace girl
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