10 lines
U spit first
no feedin
no recyclin
no bitin
no dr/crew/hate votes
good luck

15 line max......................................(forgot to add to rules).....................................12

finally foudn it, i'll spit after i eat lunch
word

peace....................
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^word.................................

going out so i'll spit now like i promised

Ya rap career is going nowhere.....only time u'd rock ice is if u froze stones.
Concushion to ya brain...u couldnt keep ya mind together like skeleton bones.
Looks like an easy win for me.....unless you start to strip n ride those dicks.
Hide ya secret you ridin dawgs for vote......even ya crew name says it all..Tic's.
Anonymiz Jonez pullin Trix wit rabbits.....leave the merkin to me u silly faggit.
Ya alias is all wrong cuz ya skill ends here...call me doc cuz I'mma end ya habit
U reppin the D......all a lie like OJ Simpson sayin not-guilty to a murder plea.
Ya crew is a joke jus like u beating me...cuz if U TIC then I must be makin u flea.
Commin at you with a 2line finisher..........read your verse that was the killer.
The difference in the battle ..........is my verse is organic with no extra filler.

*if u dont get soemthing dont vote*
Plz explain all votes
with good breakdowns etc.

upping for this kids verse.................
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.....................word......................... .....
post..............+1...............
word.......................out.................... .

Aiyyo check it:

U ain't-dope and u can't-cope wit it/
My gat's my scape-gote, leave u in a straight-coat, get it/
If u do, good 4 u, if u don't, oh well/
Just know I'm heaven sent to send u to hell/
Infinite-Skillz will instantly-kill u wit/
Lyrics-or-steel start plannin-ur-will bitch/
Uhhp too-late, u bit the-bait/
I kill this kid like this is Camp Crystal-Lake/
I'll flip-n-drill this bitch, just ask his mom/
I used love her until she told me u were her son/
U readin ur own verse, thinkin that shit raw/
Well, put my dick in ur eye and FUCK WHAT U SAW/

Vote=Jones

flow=Jones
punches=Jones
metas=Jones
similies=Jones

he killed this kid in my eyes


yo Johnes please hit htis up dawg

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75275

1-0 my way............................................... .uppin........................................for. ............................votes

Breakdown For Ya:

Flow-Jones
Multi-Jones
Punches-Jones
Enjoyability-Jones
Creativness-One
Structure-One

Overal-Jones

This Was A Basic Killer For One. Your Punches Were Lopsided And you Flow Was Pretty Basic. I Dident See Any Multi's Which Is a No No For Mc's No-A-Days. Try To Elevate And Get Your Spits More Advanced, Like With A Better Vocab And More Direct Punches.

DeadlySilence thanx for the input.............................still 1-0........................uppin for votes

Uppin for votes.............................Uppin for votes.............................Uppin for votes.............................Uppin for votes(3)

Werd^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


hit up my battles wit a honest vote peace
~UNO~

Plz dont quote votes..................
read the verses think of something to type ur self,...................

Deadly silence just cus u dont see dashes dont mean there are no multi's...................

murder-plea
making-u-flea

was-the-killer
no-extra-filler

............newb votes......................
direct punches???????
dissing him n his crew?????

whateva playa

flow-jones
punches-jones
metas-jones
overall-jones

nuff said^^ .