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i'm high as fuck
too drunk to drive my truck 2 much speed feel as I'll never O.D. never seen so clearly PCP feel so free LSD scared 2 be alive about 2 take a nose dive 2 think this is all a crime watch all tha pigs come outta the hive time to make love 2 my 37 wives need 2 AK-47's lets c how many die it funny that this ain't a lie lets c if i can make a grown man cry guess how many motherfuckers get caught in my drive bys how much crack B4 i get shot in the back it gonna happen like shit after exlax but all I can do is relax |
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hmm... let me see
flow was easy to find but just for presentation purposes you should fix it up. The vocab was VERY simple... and my pet peeve is usless number: B4 LSD scared 2 be alive about 2 take a nose dive 2 think this is all a crime watch all tha pigs come outta the hive time to make love 2 my 37 wives being that this is TEXT i am looking to see if the numbers add up or something, so i suggest if you just need to say 'to' then put it in. also when you put 2 i think you mean two which makes no sence in some line 4/10 I know you can do better... hit the books take that how you want |
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