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THE LAST OMEN(you cant stop me)
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My monoxide- mix to remix with a fix- of dithyamide-
Verbaler homicide...... making lyrical murder. So basically, You want as much beaf as soy burgers. There’s 2 kinds of led to fear if i blast-cause I draw fast- weather the mercury Dip hollow tip…. Or on a skillcraft. Im that real! My flow down pour regardless of weather-regardless what ever- Im the hardest and clever-and if I aint your equal…. I can only be better. Ripen every m.c. in ALPHABETICAL ORDER,per ALPHA LETTER- So if you ever want a sample…...................... F.U.!!!! you get beat on beat each punchline hits per sample cue-of 2. So if it’s a 2 beat count you’ll loose twice- loose 2 life’s. Yeah you underground crew types, roll deep-but that’s a metaphor bitch they only R.I.P togeather burried 6 feet. You all some TRANSIES talken you put work. maybe on the DALANCIE CORNER CROSS DRESSING kid I flip SKIRTS-and BURRY anyone of you fakes who claim you do DIRT. It’s NON CENTZ the OMEN with a legion-of cockriders’ that pledge allegiance-To my secretions-of flames that can leave you lames with 3rd degree burn lesions. Im hot and could hearted…so once the lessons started- you’ll learn I equate to everything from the equator to the polar regions-so fear me. or Be left departed-like the pangian theory. i crucify those blasphormer’s for not believen. If you take my name in veign, you will be left bleeden. Cause I hustle words… with muscle verbs… you couldnt find in track meeting. Your styles receading-with skills sponsored by rogaine. You’re an f-18 im an f-14... kid im another PLAIN. Another level, you cant see from your 180 degree hemisphere-I rule the earth’s 360 sphere by atmosphere. fuck being transparent my actions make everything clear. I don’t like ¾’s of all of you. That means to me 3 out of every four is whore’s. Who think fucken with me is your only chance to go HARD~KORE(xxx). So for you cats that don’t think im twisted with the slur- Im in the mix and once I stir- id say fuck you..... fuck your mom...... and the guy that fucked her. So forget dropping a cd.. you aint got one-and if you did I wouldnt cop it if it came with a refund. HOOK: *scratches* the omens,,,, this is verbal retaliation-murder kill and assasination. A MILLION WAYS TO DIE YOU DO THE CALCULATIONS- strangle a choke artist ,cut his blood sirculation- then kill the dj for given him rotation.x2 ___________________beat change_______________________ You nigguz think you sound cute-but got it confused like obtuse infused with angles measured acute. i spit the facts thats a fact kid its true- Your skills harder to understand than latins in domestic diputes. While my talent translates to a win regardless of subtitles- So rivals- battle the god qouting exorcist passages from bibles. Who are you to me? Nothing more than an easy victory! An out dated rapper trying to get hit by a punch(line) to collect dissability. These kids is jokes-acten thug but carry no slugz and would’nt be STRAPPED FOR CASH unless they were broke .Oh that’s your illest joint? Watch it get smoked. As you get yoked-for being whack….. I’ll kill you in a song and leave you dead in your tracks. I un balance peoples' heart rate on ballads. if I was you and not me then I’d be a waiste of talent. the kid who secreamed godamnit-that CENTZ showed the whole planet you exposed spitten ASS like you tossed salads. My extrateresstrial intellectual perception-could alienate regardless of M.I.B protection. The exsemtion of perfection- the sybolism of true lyricism. while your video displays girls shaken they assess for fan hypnotism-you claim realism. Its just embarrassing you all are a mess- killen rap so basically you assisted in PAC’S DEATH. HEAVEN BLESS those pioneers- who are not here-until im laid to rest-i'll make thes fakes take they last breaths-just out of respect. If I don’t succeed my last will and testaments-will distill through my fans inheritence-carry me last rights on sabordinents-and drop bombs on each of these m.c.’s coredinents. It gets twice that intence-in an instance- while im living cause I can fire bulls~eye regardless of distance. You subject lacks matter…so it doesn’t matter- ill shit on you like a squeezed colon or blatter. come back and splatter you flat then do it again and beat you flatter. shatter-your every appendage and scatter them…like they did OSIRUS plus since- your addicted to persistance-I’ll show you the tight shit with a mic shoved in your anal entrance. take an x~ray and cram it in till it resembles your large intestines. This aint a battle verse or threat disbursed-this a curse- for those in my path who wish to get murked my sub verse will submerse-and shock you at a thousand megahertz. Im better than you better then him better then them.im xx surrounded by mating xy meaning One masculine trapped by some feminem-lesbians. HOOK: *scratches* the omens,,,, this is verbal retaliation-murder kill and assasination. A MILLION WAYS TO DIE YOU DO THE CALCULATIONS- strangle a choke artist ,cut his blood sirculation- then kill the dj for given him rotation.x2 Last edited by WORD~PERFECT : 09-19-03 at 06:56 AM. |
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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WOW that was like a 5 minute read...
1st verse - fire... i love the number use.. espically that bar with 2... multies kinda lacking but wordplay, vocab and flow more than made up for it Hook - i felt it could have been better i couldnt find the flow or the rhymes 2nd verse - not as good as the 1st to me... once again the multies lacked, and it seemed you were running out of steam cause a few lines seemed forced You subject lacks matter…so it doesn’t matter- ill shit on you like a squeezed colon or blatter-and splatter you flat then do it again and beat you flatter. good internal rhymes but it seemed forced to me over all great drop kid... p.s. dont i see you on like every open mic i respond on... If you would be so kind *not a battle* http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80529 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134 |
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i will peep it out twin and thanks for honest feed back
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yo your attachment threads dont show pop oh and so you know the sencond verse is a beat change where the style flips also i edited the hook to format batter now.
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p.s. i liked the old hook more
![]() u got a PM with the style switch the 2nd comes out better.. but 1st is stil my fav |
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AIGHT
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yo son...this was Fire...keep reppin' them Boricua mutt Brooklynite Omenz (only me and you lol)...
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34 TH SARATOAG TWIN BORICUA ANTES EL FIN MY BROTHER I EDITED SOME OF IT IF YOU SEE ANYTHING YOU DODNT LIKE TELL ME
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Utica Av. papichulo...right here...I'd maybe add a coupla more multi'z but other than that...it's all good...
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YO WHERE IS OUR COLLAB I SEN CLEAR YOUR PM BOX
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aiiight...cleared...
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YO hot Shit No Doubt
Am feeelin it reppin it to the fullest Contact me fo Collabo word and yea i send u PM |
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no doubt
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UPPIN
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