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10-13-03, 08:00 AM
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where is y'all at
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yo yo uh
this game is really scrutinizing, bad for ur health cuz i aint gotta say shit, money speaks for itself im the sickest ass 14 yr old, been there done em and if m. jackson came on a lollipop u'd probly suck em i was flippin the chains, gettin the brains, cuz my illz got so sick they thought i was insane they sent me to the clinic, but the meds r workin the creepers stay lurkin, the hatas stay jerkin see i've eatin more sushi than a 10 yr chinese see some so thin they strectch, just call em siamese been outa this site for so long i've lost dickridin but some things just dont change, crazypatients biting but im the original shit, straight out the jungle like an animal eatin the game up, call me a fuckin cannibal get the fuck out new-b's, go back to school cuz all those dicks in ur mouth r causin u to drool but the vets got all the flow, got all the rep but they cant say the words when its me, kinda like strep ur a cheerleada wit pep, but i get paid but ur hair in a braid and let the football team give u aids im tired, its only 8 in the mornin, im not ready cuz the flow of my hand on my dick still isnt steady hahaha i jus' wrote that to give myself a laugh. watcha all think
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10-13-03, 08:12 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
yo guyz peep this. tell me watcha think
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___________ u prolly dont have a job and u sleep at da dock put u outa ur misery so u can hang wit tupac Victims Onyx_Storms(ko) 86barsfromva(ko) XtremeFlow(5-1) crazypatient(ko) crazypatient gorillaquantity(ko) pro.fess.in.all(5-1) |
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10-13-03, 08:57 AM
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Straight Savage.
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It Was Aight. And You Ain't The Illest 14 Year Old. Believe That! Work On Everything Because It Wasn't Great.
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10-13-03, 08:58 AM
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BANNED
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IP:
hmmm...
flow and rhymes were aight you had a couple off multi's and shit... your wordplay sucked... not dope at all 5/10 |
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10-13-03, 09:40 AM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP:
was okie...keep elqavtin an actually try an think before you put it up may help your script...peep myn word yet unrevealed...and...Made You Vision Blood ...1
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10-13-03, 03:39 PM
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Banned for being stupid
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IP:
that was ok homie, i thought it could have been alot better wit more thought put into it, but its still not bad, try and elevate a little more on ur vocab and wordplay, and try and think of a better topic to write about, u got potential, u just gotta develop ur skills.
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10-13-03, 03:41 PM
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BANNED
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IP:
yeah^^it was okay dawg but the vocab could use some elvatin and shit... the flow was okay but keep postin
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