fuck the lying babies it's becuz of the love i innovate to make my rhyming crazy
but what's the point, i visited a site where all the wacks conspired against me
with sickly keystyles the brainsurgeon proceeded to spit wild
choked a swimmer to show those jokers the meaning of "murderous freestyle"!!
except faggots couldn't read-rhyme, even when i dropped to mutilate
now i seriously think there're wack niggaz who would bitch, rather than elevate!

man... incredibly short but wasnt too bad.. the vocab was aite.. the multis were nice and the structure is nice. and definitly sent a message... but it seems to be meant to be short..nonethelesss it was a short sweet peice keep elevatin, one.

short and sweet..........nice!
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^^^straight wordness.....i thought it was kinda short, but it was to the point which made for a pretty good read, ur vocab was lackin a little, but ur wordplay and content was pretty good, u had a pretty original topic, overall id say it was a pretty good drop, keep postin homie, that was nice.

peace.......

yeah pretty tight sometimes the length doesnt matta jus al long as u get ur word across and its ill and shit