10-14 lines maz
i dont no u i just saw u in bs
So u down
blind spit
35 minutes from check in
pc
check in anstat the keying process

yep....checkin in...verse will be posted withing 35 minutes...blah

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I left ya parts dangling from trees, head spinning and star-spangled
The only blows you sending unclog MC's pipes so I"ll call you drano
I'll peel ya skin, your "weak with words" so I'll kill the syntax
Ya skill is rif-raf, sear ya corpse while I spit flames so your soul will feel the impact
Better stay anonymous, puncture holes in your esophagus
Choke on your own spit to think you''ll win is preposterous
Ya Flows ample, I'll leave ya words trampled
I'm still wondering why ure in such a hurry to be man-handled
It's like the W is in the stars the way both are always out of your reach
You couldn't find "common sense" with a metal detector at a beach
Wait a minute! I"ve just won, has anyone flinched?
Someone call the cops, this Brotha's been Lynched!

alright isnce the other fu hasnt posted yet ill hit this up if u guys hit mine up wit honest vtoes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86226

thanks peace

Rappadly im savagely ripping this "Vet"s lyrikal vest apart//
This lessons marked for chaos, schoolin this kid before the test even starts//
For this kid this battles gunna be hard,Cuz 4 votes its a must to ask//
plus its fact,only way u gunna feel skill if u brush up fast//
YA scripts are crap,Rappad u cudnt be money if u was the bank commsioner//(UNDER AvY)
My Spits are drillin u in like i was the dental Practioner//
Hopin i didnt show up u came weak,Thats why u thought to drop first//
I smoke weed,an weak M c's, But im methodical i got more patience then doctors//
This brothas lynched<naw thats just played how can u contest me wit heavenly rhymes//
But u dont get it kid,still typin the same murder shit seventy times//
THis battles finished,im quick to hit submit reply cuz im a menace//
Ya raps been denied ,cuz im takin this win at the end of this sentence//

punches.............rappad
flow...............both
multies.................Lynche
metaphors...........rappad
personals...........rappad
similes............rappad
vocab............Lynche
overall.............rappad

Rappd Ive seen you come way better..........anyway please hit thsi up honestly bro, sorry i cant poll thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86410

^^Aite fool
wuteva man...i aint no newb
if rappad wasnt 31-29 u wudnt voted for him
nut wuteva it dont count.
uppin for honest votes............................................. ...

both evrses were average, i've seen RAppad come ALOT better....

Rappad's verse was lacking personals, and punches didn't realkly stand out and felt he could have come alot harder....

Punches = BL
Word-Play = Even
Flow = Rappad
Originality = BL
Personals = BL
Multies = BL
Vocab = Rappad


Overall = BL


Close battle but BL took it with better punches, both verses were average and could have been better......

My Vote = Brotha Lynch

pCe

ok brotha....that might be a dq....35 minutes from check in...you took 1 hour 9 minutes..............
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aight yo--rappad ya had a good flow, aight structure, couple aight punches i was feelin----broth aya had a ok flow, sum multis, not bad punches but not hard enuff---vote=rappad

return beeyatches---oneeeeee

uppin..
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Rappad bra I gave u feedback on this shit the least u can do it Hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86410

uppin for votes...
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i give this shit to rappad....he out-edged you by a little bit....it was a nice flow for a noob though....rappad woulda and coulda merked you if he woulda take you serious, so be grateful for that....no hate tho, nice flows...

hit this shit up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86435

its obvious u all vote for him cuz u need a battle to be voting on
LOL
wow
the only vet in here...that didnt have a link said Lynch.....
this was a average battle ive seen rappad come stronger he came weak onthis ..didnt feel much lacked punhces

I left ya parts dangling from trees, head spinning and star-spangled
The only blows you sending unclog MC's pipes so I"ll call you drano
First line was aa filler..but the meta4 paid it off i guess..weak.

I'll peel ya skin, your "weak with words" so I'll kill the syntax
Ya skill is rif-raf, sear ya corpse while I spit flames so your soul will feel the impact
Coo shit....aite

Better stay anonymous, puncture holes in your esophagus
Choke on your own spit to think you''ll win is preposterous
Big worsds cudnt make yp for this weak line
u shud be spittin hotter fool..ive seen u wit siccer lines

Ya Flows ample, I'll leave ya words trampled
I'm still wondering why ure in such a hurry to be man-handled
It's like the W is in the stars the way both are always out of your reach
You couldn't find "common sense" with a metal detector at a beach
Wait a minute! I"ve just won, has anyone flinched?
Someone call the cops, this Brotha's been Lynched!

Dat was aite......Last liine was a coo ender nuthin special.

Rappadly im savagely ripping this "Vet"s lyrikal vest apart//
This lessons marked for chaos, schoolin this kid before the test even starts//
COo mutlies not bad pucnh..nuthin great....
For this kid this battles gunna be hard,Cuz 4 votes its a must to ask//
plus its fact,only way u gunna feel skill if u brush up fast//
Aite a bit choppy....
YA scripts are crap,Rappad u cudnt be money if u was the bank commsioner//(UNDER AvY)
My Spits are drillin u in like i was the dental Practioner//
HMMM...this was aite..wasnt feelin it tho

Hopin i didnt show up u came weak,Thats why u thought to drop first//
I smoke weed,an weak M c's, But im methodical i got more patience then doctors//
Nice..SUM words were non needed
This brothas lynched<naw thats just played how can u contest me wit heavenly rhymes//
But u dont get it kid,still typin the same murder shit seventy times//
That was tite..for a newb

THis battles finished,im quick to hit submit reply cuz im a menace//
Ya raps been denied ,cuz im takin this win at the end of this sentence//

Aite finisher
\BOth lacked personals mager..sum punches were thrown
my vote goes to Bl For the simple fact he had better Mulites
everything else was even

Yo hit da link up