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10-20-03, 03:26 PM | #1 | ||
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Topic - Fights
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yo, you cant rap and i think youll cry when i smash ya teeth in,
u about to find out what happens to people that start beefin, u couldnt stand up to a midget and could be easily killed witta pillow, i can battle ya n rattle ya lyrically n leave ya weeping like willows, leave a man fucked up but u just lucky i dont kill-though, u dont wanna battle but behind my back u say i should start-steppin, i can hurt u wit my fist or my intellect cause my lyrics are like a smart-weapon, any fuckin fool who think they can be more clever-then-me, become a victom of punches more precise then severin-flea's, im never-in-need of help or hints n tips from any decent-post, im not a killer.. but i can leave people fuckin diseaced-n-gross, get blown away cause i bring wit me the strong-vibes, flippin scripts wit or hittin you is more boring then long-drives, |
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10-20-03, 04:07 PM | #2 | ||
Word.
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IP:
Yeah this was a pretty decent piece i thought....it flowed pretty well as i read it...Try adding some more internals to it...your had pretty good multies i thought...structure was good too...your vocab was pretty good...You had good metas in there...overall it was a pretty decent piece...keep at it...and keep dropping.
and if you could leave some feedback.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86721 |
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10-20-03, 05:37 PM | #3 | ||
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IP:
thought this was average, some decent wordplay and decent flow, but i thought the puches were a little weak, but overall , not bad.........keep droppin it
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10-20-03, 06:19 PM | #4 | ||
Can u beat me?..Hell No
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IP:
yeah my nigga nice drop u had some good lines good wordplay and a lil bet of metas. this was a nice piece. nice finisher. keep droppin playa
holla |
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10-20-03, 07:27 PM | #5 | ||
GÄÑg§tå Gu®£
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IP:
To Be Honest... It Wasnt That Good ...
But It Wasnt That Bad.... Keep Elevatin' Werd
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10-24-03, 09:44 PM | #6 | ||
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yo
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10-24-03, 09:45 PM | #7 | ||
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IP:
verse by verse
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10-24-03, 09:46 PM | #8 | ||
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IP:
i Tend-Too End-You cause your a Bent-Dude
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10-24-03, 09:47 PM | #9 | ||
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freepost
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10-24-03, 11:50 PM | #10 | |
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IP:
you're banned
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