10 linez max
no nuttin....crew etc
30 min spit limit afta chek in
must chek in b4
at least 2 personals
no freepostin in here eg bitchin bout votes
dont come soft faggot
pz............


now lets see him get merked

MAN IGHT BUT I AINT PUTTIN AT LEAST TWO PERSONALS

DSFHDSHKJFHSLDHFKJDSAHF;ASDLSAKJ;LDHAS;HDASDSAD,AS LMDASM,DKJASDASLKDLASD

-Brixton- makes 'reservations' to death's inn...punches leave you with "bleeding gums" like names of "INDIAN CHIEFS"...

-Brixton- A BASTID...I'll conquer your rap style wit OBTRUSIVE TACTICS...
From the "school" of hard knocks I'll throw punchlines so ill...you wonder how I PRODUCE THESE "CLASS-SICKS (classics)"...

Ya RHYME IS CORKED...stashed away in a FINE RESORT eating you for lunch with a KNIFE AND FORK...
TALON’S QUITE DISTORT...I'll LIGHT THE TORCH and bring "bra's" to ya "casket" n give ya "LIFE SUPPORT"...

I'll SEVER THIS FAG...Ya 'text is trash'...might as well put ya LETTERS IN 'BAGS'...
Like your "record" I'm "losing my patience" with battling you wack cats like low-profit "MEDICAL STAFFS"...

I'm Treatin-Ya-Worst... Decieven~With~Curse, -Brixton- I'd Make U *Eat Ya Own Words* But It's Probaly Not Even-Ur-Verse!!
(He's A Fuckin' Biter... Pathetic!)

UPPIN FOR THIS CATS VERSE AND DONT BE TALKING BOUT HAMPSTERS ON WHEELS AND SHIT
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Shit jus saw this kwik freestyle.........shud be enuf to merk this cheeky loser.............


Hate These Sad Bitches That Flirt Glocks In The Avaters,
This Herb Talon Dont Bring Heat,Jus Adds To His Haters.
Already Hung This Chump To Dry On Tha Shelf,All By Myself,
Not By Stealth,In Open View For All Peeps To See This Elf.
Coz His Punches Lay Low,Its Like They Play Hide N Go Seek,
You've Been Dissed All Ya Life,But Ya Couldn't Last A Week.
I Hear The Lord Calling, Its Time To Merk N Send You Above,
But I Bet Ya Kill Yaself, Like Kurt Cobain Did For Courtney Love.
So Put Yaself Outta Misery, In Fact...Do It For The Rest Of Us,
Or Jump In An Institution...So You Bounce Of Walls N Get Fuked.

structure-brix
flow-brix
punches-brix
personals-brix

brix killed it here, talon u need to sort out your structure,

honest vote here plz,gettin mad slept on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=85996

hmmm...looks like a god damn d/r but w/e get yo cheat votes

You've Been Dissed All Ya Life,But Ya Couldn't Last A Week.
^ OH NOO SHIT THATS TOO HARSH!

-Brixton-
Your Style Is Exactly Like Mine Fo Real!
I Thought That Was Me Battelin For A Quick Second LOL
But Nah U Came Hard!

I Hear The Lord Calling, Its Time To Merk N Send You Above,
But I Bet Ya Kill Yaself, Like Kurt Cobain Did For Courtney Love.
^ I Dont Like That Line Its Too Kind LoL

So Put Yaself Outta Misery, In Fact...Do It For The Rest Of Us,
Or Jump In An Institution...So You Bounce Of Walls N Get Fuked.
^ Sounds Like Somethin I Would Say To My Ex B.f
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Talon You Had Good Multis

Ya RHYME IS CORKED...stashed away in a FINE RESORT eating you for lunch with a KNIFE AND FORK...
TALON’S QUITE DISTORT...I'll LIGHT THE TORCH and bring "bra's" to ya "casket" n give ya "LIFE SUPPORT"...

^ I Dont Like The Way You Add In Capitals And Put Dots........<
And then use these ""

Without That It Would Look So Much Better


I'll SEVER THIS FAG...Ya 'text is trash'...might as well put ya LETTERS IN 'BAGS'...
Like your "record" I'm "losing my patience" with battling you wack cats like low-profit "MEDICAL STAFFS"...

^ Its Kinda Played But Meh Its Aight

I'm Treatin-Ya-Worst... Decieven~With~Curse, -Brixton- I'd Make U *Eat Ya Own Words* But It's Probaly Not Even-Ur-Verse!!
(He's A Fuckin' Biter... Pathetic!)
^ I Like That!!!!

Aight Well Lets C...

Why Do I Feel So Nervous When Voting In This LOL?

punches=Tied up
multis=Talon
Metaz=-Brixton-
structure=Brixton-
wordplay=Tie

Seriously I Cant Stand A Verse With Bad Structure It Makes Me Not Wanna Read It.. But Keep Elevatin And Dont Vote Against Me Cuz Im Only Votin Fairly

Vote=Brix

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i dunno, im still bewildered with RB's vets

when i read their verses, it doesnt seem vet material to me (no offense brix) but the disses just seem elementary

but wuteva, mayb thats the style for RB, the love elementary stuff

even sayin that, Brix got this tho

the other guy, wasnt really feelin his disses, and seemed kinda forced and some were played

structure = brix
flow = brix
punches = both
wordplay = talon
metas = brix

vote = brix

this battle was *blagh*

hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87324

origanally posted by Talon

I can't vote, but I got a comment. I liked the battle, it was interesting. It is obvious Brixton is a little more advanced but Talon wasn't weak, he just needed a little harder edge to his rap.
All in all, good show gents!

check out Aragorn in action@http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87431

flow..Brix
punches..Tie
vocab..Brix
originality...Brix
personals...Brix

overall...Brix

Peep this and vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=86845

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