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Sex Song
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Gotta sex drive like a X5, Get the legs high spead em out, Put it in their mouth so they dont shout, Dirty dance with a dirty song/
I love to see women up in they thong, Goin deep throat, on a bed, car, on the water in my boat/ Thats a cruise ship and its ready to depart/ This is sex games ma aint no games of the heart/ Cause ya know I dont love you I'm tryna get in them pants/ I wasn't feelin ya that much at the club in fact I didnt wanna dance/ I jus wanted to know if you'd give this man a chance/ To use your jeans as a mirror so I could see whats in them pants/ Not in those Jeans..This aint Ginuine or a remake/ Just promise me girl you dont think that this is love that we make/ Its just sex, old and dirty, rough and flirty, down and out, balls in mouth and dick in ass/ Yo shorty you mind if my boy jumps in too I think I remembered he asked/ You sittin thinkin about your lonely past when your father used to touch ya in innapropriate ways/ Well ma he's jus sick you'll like how you feel today/ My bed's a double king size ready and clean/ For you to be at the foot of my bed suckin the penis clean/ Condoms you say? I dont believe in that word/ Lets go back to the caveman days where condoms were absurd/ Raw Dawg is all there is I'm sorry no tires/ And I'm sorry about sayin I'd go easy, trust me I aint no liar/ After one pill of ecstacy we gon be on our way/ With some Tangueray and Tonic and a drop of ocean spray/ This is how you remind me of a girl I fucked today/ Cause the last girl that sucked me off my dick got stuck on her labret hahahahahah/ |
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I liked the gereneral lines at sex. .Just casusally spittin on it & found this the type of thing you'd like to be played in a club
But. .The flow was really quite bad & the structure was horrible. .Sry, no hate but the truth & this was very elementry Pz. .Elevate & stay up |
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the content was there the everything came in,,,,the flow fell and structure but like myself we have styles that may not beunderstood unless we spit them....stay up and keep postin i remember you from before i know you an ill cat.
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IP:
Thats a good topic... but no flow whatsoever... some of your lines were 1 1/2 times longer then others and some were shorter...
I also found you rhymed the same words a couple times... and thats my pet peeve, unless u got a multi to back it up. I give this a 4/10. |
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