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10-28-03, 07:17 PM | #1 | ||
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Aa quick freestyle(word play)
IP:
YO I AINT FROM "MEMPHIS" BUT THE FLOW IS "GRIZZLY"//
IM LIKE A SHOVLE AN DIRT YOUR GIRL JUST DIGS ME// I AINT GANGSTA BUT FUCK AROUND AN CATCH THREE AROUND YOUR SKULL LIKE A IVERSON HEAD BAND// FUCK BATMAN AND ROBIN IM "ROBIN" WITH A "BAT" MAN// I'LL NUT ON YOUR FOOD JUST SO I CAN SAY YOU FEED MY KIDS// YOUR LIFES AN AUCTION DOG YOUR LUCKY I DONT PULL IT AN PUT IN MY BID// WHEN I PULL THE CHAIN SON THE BOATS GET FRANTIC// CAUSE MY ICE THE SIZE SON THAT SUNK THE TITANIC// YOUR LIKE A PAIR OF SNEAKERS YOUR JUST FACEIN DA "FEET"// I'LL THROW YOU OFF A BUILDING SO YOU CAN SAY YOU MET THE STREET//- 10 GIVE ME SOME FEED BACK ON THIS PIECE, THX. PEACE
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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10-28-03, 07:22 PM | #2 | ||
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IP:
yeah the best thing about this is the word play, even though it was short you lost the flow a couple of times, maybe cos of the structure, i think it suited the length ant more and i would have probably been bored, aight..overall pretty average....peace!
can you hit this plz.......... http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=88249 |
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10-28-03, 07:41 PM | #3 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
thx for the feed back nigga, and i'll deff. chek ur shit out.
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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10-28-03, 07:56 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP:
that was a nice drop, funny as fuck in places
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all nice, but ur spellin need a lil work, e.g SHOVLE shovel, it cool to misspell certain words, dont write in caps, an dont usually hav more that one Quote:
nice dop though, i was jus pickin out the bad bits |
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10-28-03, 09:30 PM | #5 | ||
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IP:
pretty short but it was aight
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