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11-04-03, 01:25 AM | #1 | ||
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suicide (what would u do?)
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Suicide
[intro] yo…I just want…every motherfucking body…to understand...the pain...of losing a friend...and I want...everybody...to know...I have felt the pain...and still feel it...and i wanna tell yáll...i didn’t give a fuck...when my grandpa...jumped...under a train...and I think that...the driver of that train...is a hero...haha...yo [verse 1] have you ever felt how fucked up it is to have a friend killing himself/ and if you hear the only thing you want is blow everybody away with a couple off shells/ i keep spittin shit for my dawgs straight outta my motherfuckin soul/ to all my dead homie’s...rest in peace y’all/ but to my mom’s father...burn in fuckin hell faggot/ I wouldn’t even EAT ya, if I was a hungry maggot/ But I’m human if you know what that means hoe/ I don’t wanna be family of this fucking homo/ I you was still alive I would’ve beat yo brain out on the flo/ But did I want you to kill yourself?...NO/ I wanted myself to kill ya bitch, with my bare hands yo/ [chorus] (suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/ (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/ (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/ (suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/ [verse 2] I wasn’t on your funeral you worthless motherfucker, cuz there was no funeral and I had too much fun/ Yo faggot-ass can I ask you how many of your children love you? That’s an easy question...none/ Yeah, we all hate you, period, done/ Let’s talk about one of my friends that killed himself too/ Not that I’m gonna diss HIM, he’s koo, peace to you!/ Thirteen years old he was, didn’t know what the futer might bring, not telling the truth/ You could have been here still/ But now my stomach and head are spinnin like a windmill/ What was your fuckin reason to kill/ (yourself) I admitt I cried for u a while and had some pills/ Even though you’re not here anymore, I still got respect for you, you’re ill/ [chorus] (suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/ (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/ (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/ (suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/ [verse 3] suicide is a fucked up thing, G/ peeps don’t think twice for they jump,cut,bleed, or shoot and feel the heat/ i had suicidal tendeeys a couple of times, but I thought homie!/ and it worked cuz I’m still here as you can probably see/ too bad it doesn’t work for everybody, cuz it’s just fucked up if you go to school and peeps ask, sup?/ and that you’ve gotta answer that you feel fucked-up/ and tell that a friend killed himself and they ask, what?/ if I cried they laughed cuz they never felt the pain dawg/ they’re livin a good life whit happy parents and shit, fuck/ and I told these little mothafuckas, what would do if your friend just died/ bitch nigga...you allso would’ve cried/ [chorus] (suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/ (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/ (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/ (suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/ (what?) (suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/ (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/ (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/ (suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/ (once again) (suicide) what would you do when your friend just died/ (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa’s dead and you think it’s aight/ (suicide) what would you do when your grandpa hates you , fight?/ (suicide) what would you do when your parents found out you lied/ (yeah) |
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11-04-03, 02:40 PM | #2 | ||
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o yeah forgot the votes:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4760#post884760 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4318#post884318 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4736#post884736 _________________________________________________ |
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11-05-03, 02:32 AM | #3 | ||
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uppin
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11-05-03, 10:26 PM | #4 | ||
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damn that shit was deep as hell,
and i think i know how you feel cuz my brother killed himself over shit .... i rate that shit 9/10 |
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11-05-03, 10:49 PM | #5 | |
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yo dawg som tight shit aiight ill give a 5/5 for everything dawg that shit was awesome.
Aiight Peace (v)....{/]~{UsKi}~[\ |
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11-06-03, 09:09 AM | #6 | ||
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thanx y'all...
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11-06-03, 10:36 AM | #7 | |
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wow. this was the best fucking open mic i've seen in a long time. i think real talent is here. i hate that line in verse three though. too bad it doesn’t work for everybody, cuz it’s just fucked up if you go to school and peeps ask, sup?/
Maybe you should make it a little shorter. Truthfully, this sounds like an Em song, which is cool. it could actually be produced. |
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11-06-03, 11:47 AM | #8 | |
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good topic... but your hook kinda went astray... other than
that.. you stayed on course pretty well... Im liking the emotion you put forth into this... keep droppin... this was a good peice... soon, you'll be one of the top open mic heads in here... ~AshY~ |
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11-06-03, 01:24 PM | #9 | |
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could u reply to mine?
devil's walking stick |
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11-07-03, 12:52 AM | #10 | ||
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uppin
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11-07-03, 04:46 AM | #11 | |
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i can relate to dis one. good job.
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11-07-03, 09:21 AM | #12 | ||
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deeper than lil kim would take down her throat (as I say)
good concept an one thing you managed to do is make people feel like a relative to your work which in somewhat is hard to pull off... good read... good idea... structured rather well = good post |
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11-07-03, 10:01 AM | #13 | ||
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deeper than lil kim would take down her throat (as I say)
^haha...lol |
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11-07-03, 10:36 AM | #14 | ||
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Nice, liked the emotional input, other than that 3/5 it was alrite Peace (produce it? rite) Peace
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11-07-03, 10:39 AM | #15 | ||
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thanx I apreciate
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