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11-06-03, 03:51 PM
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De M-O-D Bruk
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What Are The Sucessful Elements Of A Topical Verse
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I thought that imagery and story was a huge part...apparently not..so enlighten me...
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11-06-03, 03:55 PM
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I Am The Light
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originality in my book kills anything..but definitly the depth as well..imagery is always good so the reader can depict the story better...and story goes along the lines of originality...some people aren't original no matter how hard they try...takes an autistic mind to really capture insanity in a piece...
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11-06-03, 03:57 PM
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De M-O-D Bruk
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that explains my understanding a bit better...but there have got to be other elements according to the things I have seen gone down...
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11-06-03, 03:59 PM
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I say, that imagery and originality are important, but without the delivery and the right expansion of words, it wont be good.
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11-06-03, 04:10 PM
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So what about those cats who rely on a dictionary/thesauras to get there words..than it's not original than they do something to try to make themselves feel good..
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It's Gunna Be Some Stuff You Gon' See, That's Gunna Make It Hard To Smile In Da Future...
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11-06-03, 04:15 PM
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dont use a thesausas, a gud way to expand is use slang sometimes. or subsitute words for words, making it seem like your telling the story from your view.
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11-06-03, 04:16 PM
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De M-O-D Bruk
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Exactly..people don't fuckin do that do..they use cheater methodz..
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It's Gunna Be Some Stuff You Gon' See, That's Gunna Make It Hard To Smile In Da Future...
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11-06-03, 04:28 PM
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Yep, fronting like there j.k rowling.
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11-06-03, 04:33 PM
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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with my topicals i go for imagry, content, and wordplay
i ususally try and tell a story with mine... |
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11-06-03, 04:34 PM
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Banned
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White Lite...u wont elevate u suk so dont worry about it
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11-07-03, 07:59 AM
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imagery...originality....flips in the story...and word play all crucial parts to a topical ...in some pieces maybe not word play so much but it all helps to make a dope piece
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11-07-03, 12:14 PM
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Special Ghost To Blow
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~posted by deacon..couldnt have said it better~
"originality" in my book kills anything..but definitly the depth as well..imagery is always good so the reader can depict the story better...and story goes along the lines of originality...some people aren't original no matter how hard they try...takes an artistic mind to really capture insanity in a piece... -1- well deacon I had thought so as well....ridiculous fucks Last edited by Content : 11-07-03 at 12:16 PM. |
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11-07-03, 12:22 PM
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Middle Weight
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<---got a 29 on his ACT's....uses the big words and doesn't have to look them up! Only when I'm arguing/debating though. Who the fuck wants to talk like that all the time?
Sorry, forgot to reply to the topic. Imagery...orginality....a fresh concept on the topic. One that isn't predictable. Something no one else could think of. Last edited by Lethargic : 11-07-03 at 02:01 PM. |
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11-07-03, 02:18 PM
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Middle Weight
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It needs to flow, have internals and multi's, portray the topic using imagery and emotion, have a good writers voice and word choice placed behind it.
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11-07-03, 04:09 PM
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Middle Weight
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Originality
Creativity A story line Let your imagination run....Lord knows I have and can hardly keep up with it. |
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