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11-06-03, 11:51 PM
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"Gimme My Box Back Bitch!"
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im sick of the names & tired of jokes..
..mightaswell tie up this rope. & tie up my throat, till i die of a choke. im tired & broke, it's really no fun. when ur pockets are linted.. ..& theres no funds or a percentage. & just when it's so done, im still propped up locked at the finish. w/ scratchers w/out a drop of a winning. . . . . . the unemployment line is a boring find.. ..thats the only place where being bored is fine. the lines like being intertwined w/ pergatory. listening to some poor ladies hurting story.. ..until ur finally turning forty, n ur still jobless. & ur forced to stop & live life as a lil hobbit. & everytime u see a bank u jus wanna rob it. u think about all the withdrawls & deposits. i pause then i stop it, then hit the rewinder. ..but to see money to me i couldn't be blinda.. ..than Stevie,..but i wonder.. ..WHY I CANT AFFORD TO WATCH A TV! sick more, no friggin pot but still piss poor wanna stand up n take action, but i sit for.. ..a quick 4 dollars for a shot at the McDoors. the poverty is always stopping me. so i settle for salvation army shoppin spree's. call the cops.. cause.. UPS is robbin' me. they took the "this way up" right offa me. & then they dont have a job to offer me.. ..coughing & distraught with plea, please help i cant go on holding my pants with a string belt. only if u knew how we felt, this show's badder. it's worse than 12 gallons of water & no bladder. clothes tatter'd & this show cant get no wacker. but still i cant win so really theres no matter. im so battered, really broke its no stoppin ya. cause.. despite the cost of living, its so popular. Last edited by Eye WitNesS : 11-06-03 at 11:54 PM. |
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11-07-03, 12:35 AM
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11-07-03, 03:48 AM
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i replied to this piece elsewhere, nice flow, good use of internals and multi's, nice wording, all in all not a bad drop.
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11-07-03, 04:09 AM
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IP:
Nice flow, nice images. I'm feelin this one.
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11-07-03, 04:20 AM
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^ you gotta love the indepth responses of this kid, he's incredible...
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11-07-03, 09:23 AM
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BANNED - Cheating
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imaginatve an captured my attention straight away...
good word play an use of multi's which is always welcome... keep em' comming |
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11-08-03, 07:25 PM
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^..
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11-08-03, 10:57 PM
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IP:
Nice flow...i'm diggin it..later yo
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