Have You Ever…*Remix*

Relpies to…
Masta C (feat. Ken Dawg)-The Riff Raff
formula-Full Circle * Deep Piece *
Masta C (feat. Gene Pool)-Lies

yo have u ever had that feelin...
where u just cant explain wat happens..
this explains those moments....

[Chorus]
Have u ever had that felling in ya throat when ur about to choke//
Have you ever had that felling like ur lifes is 1 bigg joke//
Have you ever had a day when u think u got a shit life//
Have you ever had that feeling when ur going through strife//

[Verse 1]-UsKi
Have u ever had that feeling when ur gonna give up//
well ima make u have that feelin so u will live up//
I will show u tha way but u gotta go for It//
And don’t let ne 1 take over ur life and any ov ya shit//
Have you ever had ya best frends asken ya for a fight??//
Well I have but it isnt because ima white//
Its because he neva had that feeling ov death//
And I will start to kill for tha thrill and let em beathe his very last breath//
Have u Ever felt tha shit i've been through//
you will only kno if it happens t you//
man i bet half of ya have a good education//
well my education has limitations//
I bet u have neva had this happen...to you live in tha clare//
have you ever had that feeling that u cant show fear//
and you will neva drop a tear//

[Chorus]
Have u ever had that felling in ya throat when ur about to choke//
Have you ever had that felling like ur lifes is 1 bigg joke//
Have you ever had a day when u think u got a shit life//
Have you ever had that feeling when ur going through strife//


<~(Yaz)~>(\1/)<~(Forsaken)~>
have you ever had your life, fucked-over, and flipped *upside-down*//
it makes you feel like your fallin, and you'll never *hit-the-ground*//
shit backs up and rewinds, like your odds *just-stacked*//
cuz people don't evan know you, but they talkin to *much-smack*//
this is the reign of fire, were all *hell-is-unleashed*//
you shoulda kept-it to-yourself, now your *facin-a-beast*//
the livin forsaken one sent from the prince *of-the-dark*//
the angle with the scabbed wings, came back to *leave-my-mark*//
cuttin through souls-and-rymes, like realy *is-that-so-bad*//
I'm just takein the shit, that you *clearly-never-had*//

[Chorus]x 2
Have u ever had that felling in ya throat when ur about to choke//
Have you ever had that felling like ur lifes is 1 bigg joke//
Have you ever had a day when u think u got a shit life//
Have you ever had that feeling when ur going through strife//

yo i hope u understand this shit we hav written ......
man u betta understand that others have had that same feeling.......
your not tha only 1 we all have in different ways........

looking for feed back on this

haha koo uski... ya yall send some feedback and shit... i did parts on this verse to so yall know were im commin from

com on we want som feed back on this aiight People Peace (v)

any 1 gonna drop some feed back????

i want som fuken feed back already

nice piece............

nice verses by both of u, i thought that yaz's verse was alittle better...

the chorus is iight.. i think its needs some work

but over all - pretty good piece............

return the favor and check out my open mic piece

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92075

thanks

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