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11-14-03, 03:46 PM
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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Check it... 1-2...
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I'm a liar
Higher than spires an' i aspire to be admired by the whole planet I didn't plan it, but it still gon' happen man, it has to I'm past the point of goin' back through the maze to the mainstream, mean streets I need ta obtain strength to bring heat Be like B.G. an' "Bling, Bling" see me, sing sing, like tra-la-la an' doe-ray- fuck this shit there's no way i'm-a not call shots wit my own bouncer at bars for brawls over who bought the shots my hand stacked like countin' cards the only dollar ammount for me is LARGE I'm like a record player brain' spinnin' round in circles first of all, i'm not adverse to pop hollows i'll pay top dollar for an' assasin ta blast in ya home an' have ya ass wrapped in a body bag tha's all u need to know no more, but for your info i'm a psycho, life so fucked up I got no moral conciousness anymore i don't stop, i jus' go explode like gun shots to ya head i'm a soldier, understand? There's no greater threat or punishment then me on the attack I don't care what type-a flack ya jacket has it can't stop a plastic bag from sufficatin' an' cuttin' off ya lungs from takin' in oxygen plus ya veins can't stop me from choppin' them i'm off my hinge, nothin' can soften this blow I'm rockin' the whole world wit one note --------------------------------- this is really 2 verses i just stuck together... lol... .holla wit sum feedback
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11-14-03, 04:10 PM
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IP:
i thought this was pretty good, i liked the structure of it and how you used your words very interesting drop keep it up pz
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11-14-03, 04:30 PM
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IP:
werd... thx... where in ontario u from dawg.. ?
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11-14-03, 04:54 PM
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IP:
Flow was onpoint in this, structure was off all over the place, but that didnt matter cause you sustained the flow throughout, contenet was a little iffy at times, not quite coinnecting and the transition needed work, you skippped from idea to idea to quickly, without really building on the previous lines.
Just my two cents.
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11-14-03, 04:57 PM
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IP:
i'm near kitchener, what bout you?
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11-14-03, 05:14 PM
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IP:
CAN HIT THIS PERFECT BUT I UNDERSTAND THAT YOU HAVE OTHER THINGSD ON YOUR MIND BUT THIS WASNT TO MUCH JUSTICE FOR YOU IT WAS JUST GOOD
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11-15-03, 01:59 AM
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IP:
lol... sup word, sup cam... thx... i know i switched ideas alot 'cause it was 2 different rhymes put together into 1... i know it wan't the best but i ain't dropped 4 a while in open mic, so i fig'd why not drop a few verses ... lol.. 1.. respect..
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