DA UNFUCKWITABLE-LEAVING KATS IN CRITICAL-
CONDITION-CAUSE FRICTION-WITH EVERY SYLLABLE-
EMCEES ARE PITIFUL-I CAME TO RIDICULE-
THOSE WHO OPPOSE THE FLOW; KEEP ‘EM MISERABLE-
UNLOAD WITH BLOWS TO THE NOSE AND YA NOGGIN-
OH, YA THINK THAT YOU CAN THROW, GET IT HOPPIN-
AIN’T NO STOPPIN-ONCE DA MAN GETS TO POPPIN’-
GOT YA JAWS DROPPIN’-REPRESENTIN’ DA ROTTEN-
WITH THE WORM IN IT-
LISTEN TO MY VOICE ; THERE’S NO CONCERN IN IT-
IF DA JAM’S HOT I PUT DA BURN IN IT-
YOU KATS CAN’T RHYME BUT I HOPE YA LEARNING IT-
IT’S YA TURN TO GET-
YA MICROPHONE PLACED INSIDE A TOURNIQUET-
SO SIT BACK, RELAX AS I TURN A KID-
INSIDE OUT-PLAYTIME IS OVER ; TURN HIS LIGHTS OUT-
WALK HIM TO THE DOOR; TELL HOMIE TO RIDE OUT-
AND RECOUP BEFORE HIS WHOLE GROUPS WIPED OUT-
IT’S COOL;YOU TRIED OUT-
BUT YA CAN’T HANG-I’M KOOL AND THE GANG- WHEN SPITTIN FLAMES-
YOU KNOW DA NAME-THIS SHIT DON’T CHANGE-DOING HIS THANG-
IT’S DIGz-REMEMBER DA NAME- SAY IT AGAIN-
IT’S DIGz-BURNIN DA NAME INTO YA BRAIN-
LIKE SSSSSSSSS-SIZZLE-HOTCAKES AND GRIDDLES-
I GOTS TA ROCK - I’M TOO HOT- FUH SHIZZLE-
TOP NOTCH WHEN KICKIN’IT- NEVER FORCED; DELIBERATE-
BATTLIN’? I WON’T EVEN CONSIDER IT A LITTLE BIT! -
YOU AIN’T EVEN LEGITIMATE; YOU HOLD NO WEIGHT-
SO GO AHEAD AND GET TO GETTING’ WITH YA HOMO TRAITS-
AND WACK ASS TAPES; NOBODY ROCK CASSETTES NO MORE-
YO, YOU’S A 8-TRACK RAPPER ON A QUEST FOR WAR-
I LUV TO EAT AN EMCEE WHO LIKES TO FLEX DA JAWS -
I’LL PUT YA LYRICS TO THE TEST AS I ADDRESS YA FLAWS -
AND LET YOU KNOW I AIN’T IMPRESSED AT ALL-
YA FLOW’S WACK; I GOT BETTER THINGS TO DO THAN TO MESS WITH Y’ALL

yeha man thought this was a pretty tight drop, some nice multis, but seemed a little forced in places.....some nice vocab,,,,,yeah not a bad drop man.........keep at em....Pc

good lookin out yo

Post your replies up, thanks bud.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87961
Thats the rules thread if you need more info.

yeah dog this shit was pretty fire, dog ya used multis i don't think a part is complete without them only thing i don't like is words like fuhshizzle and shit like that but other than that dog, keep writin that crack keep up the shit dude

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yo on da real this is a nice piece seems like a tight freestyle if u ask me and i like da way u started

"DA UNFUCKWITABLE-LEAVING KATS IN CRITICAL-
CONDITION-CAUSE FRICTION-WITH EVERY SYLLABLE-
EMCEES ARE PITIFUL-I CAME TO RIDICULE"

real simple and to da point, but homie there is only one thing
more played out then "FO SHO" and thats "FUH SHIZZLE" dont write dat shit again makes ur whole vocab seem wea....but overall i think this was a tight piece

illest line in this piece:

"....NOBODY ROCK CASSETTES NO MORE-
YO, YOU’S A 8-TRACK RAPPER ON A QUEST FOR WAR"

Nice drop. You'll get more feedback if ya don't do it in caps.

good lookin out y'all... oh...and i promise never to use "for shizzle" ever again!

It was a pretty good drop homie, skitten is right. Those little ass things help. Go peep ma shit, "Closed Doors" its a deep drop.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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nice drop i liked ya use of vocab and how u started it out pretty tight shit.

good lookin out ma...one!

great drop. seems like u came with a lot of energy. and would sound nice spit on a nice high energy beat. nice vocab. keep up the good workkkk. niiiiiiice

yo my nigga this shit was fire, vocab was on point, multis was tight this piece was tight nigga. oh and like word said try not to do it all in cps aight man, over all i give this an 8/10, keep doin your thing, peace.

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Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.