fearless flow:

true hustlas this is open for ya eyes only,and truly i despise only/
dudes that don't ride for me, fake wit a mask on, disguised phoneys/
gettin outta this struggle seems like a mirage homey, sooner or later the truth collides on me/
i won't make it to the nba i'm not a hooper
so i move weight how ya think i got this fucken computer/
the hustle sticks to me, sellin bricks and keys
and easily my life can be ripped from me easliy by the clips and heat/
a liar never me, ask the fuck around in my city i'm clever to these streets/
niggas claim they will bury me, i won't have it dude i forever will carry the heat/
but i don't glorify this life i like peace, but don't be fooled i will merk and cut a nigga til i see the white meat/
think bout kickin my feet up on the the whip while sippin iced tea, its likely/

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MAC4LIFE, M.multis A.authority C.commitment,MFL
Pacaso mac the Baskin Robbins Street(hustla tryin to scoop up this ice and cream)

Check The Rules. Thank You
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87961

Well...

You Came Aight Homie...

Wasnt Very Complex But I Could Feel It...

Get A Lil Deeper And It'll Be Betta...

-P

I agree with the legend returns. Get some more vocab and complexity, you can never get enough of it. You gave me that jay-Z type of feel. I hate Jay-Z, but I like how you told a little story with it. Keep it real homie.

PEACE

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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thanks ya'l for the feed back so ya'll was really feelin my shit huh, well i'll try to listen to things ya'll said i should do i'm no t goin to just say fuck advice i'm gon take it thanks ya'll

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MAC4LIFE, M.multis A.authority C.commitment,MFL
Pacaso mac the Baskin Robbins Street(hustla tryin to scoop up this ice and cream)