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no hate

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closing -
overall -

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iight yo im checkin in....when are we gonna drop

how bout 25 mins from now??

u down??

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Drop at 6 PM EST.................

I wanna eat dinner b4 i start writing
100 char 100 char 100 char

iight......

i will

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EnVy I’ll have you "fallin breathless" quicker than “fat peeps on treadmills”
Sayin your tha champ, yet you get-killed cuz I shred-Skillz
Played lines are making a comeback, mainly cuz this^ faggot emcee
Well when i spit, it's 'as-salt'... yet my lyrics are completely 'sugar-free'
The esscence of battling, ideal balance of personals-and-punchlines
In this battle Envy's takin more "cuts" then "fat-people-in-lunchlines"
FreeYayo was your best opponent ..how the hell you claim to be hard?
And of your punches just "miss in" the point ..like a wnba guard
Out-stompin you is my sole purpose ..and did i mention that i'm gellin?
Tha only time you write 'sIC' is when your correctin his spelling
I'ma fuckin you up kid, like a police officer at a doughnut buffet
Your a fat boy with no life.... your droppin 50.46 posts per day
In all reality though, kid, I really gotta admire you on your persistance
Too bad im sendin you back where you came from: Non-Existence

You’re Fake-And-Wack, but I'm endin you're reign “Just In Time”//
When I "Make It Clap", let's see if you can "Bust A Rhyme"// [1]
Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”//
New Rap Order must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2]
Damn it I'm Focused-So-Fear, Post-Against-Queers who stand no chance against such a “Potent Carrier”//
Don’t “Hope To Be Spared”, cause when i put this "shell to your ear", I guarantee it wont be the "Ocean You Hear”// [3]
This Kid wouldn’t do a “Good job” with his “Thumb being glued “Up”//
Your flows wouldn't have “Intellect or Weight” if you was “Professor Klump”//(The Nutty Professor) [4]
Kids winning streaks always Revert-and-slow cause his VERSES-“FLOW"//
with the same consistency of a "pregnant" bitch on "BIRTH-CONTROL"// [5]
U don't even “Step Close” there's gotta be “Less Jokes”, I “Wreak Dopes” with “Tecks Folks”//
I just won this battle 5-0, cuz Being on “The Weakest Link” is the only place you'd “Get Votes”// [6]
My-Craft-Teaches, I’ve-Matched-Jesus...not-trying-to-Brag, But-Please-Kid, EnVy “Off The Chain” like “Snatched Pieces!”//
You Cant-Beat-This”, Im’a-Rap-Genus, I Pack-Heat-Shit....with “three life lines” that’s-Half-decent, even “Ask Regis!”// [7]

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and yo dominator... i never claimed to be hard or to be the champ

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uppin for some votes..............

.......need some votes............

com on yo................

dont sleep on this

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shit my bad... on the 2nd bar its supposd to be

Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”//
Dominator must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2]

not new rap order

when me and new rap order were gonna battle, i wrote my verse for him the day that we were gonna spit....but he neva spit his..so i didnt use it, so i decided to use it for this, yea i kno its pre-write...but it only took me 20 mins to write it b4 and i didnt edit it, as u can see.

This is what its supposed to say:

You’re Fake-And-Wack, but I'm endin you're reign “Just In Time”//
When I "Make It Clap", let's see if you can "Bust A Rhyme"// [1]
Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”//
Dominator must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2]
Damn it I'm Focused-So-Fear, Post-Against-Queers who stand no chance against such a “Potent Carrier”//
Don’t “Hope To Be Spared”, cause when i put this "shell to your ear", I guarantee it wont be the "Ocean You Hear”// [3]
This Kid wouldn’t do a “Good job” with his “Thumb being glued “Up”//
Your flows wouldn't have “Intellect or Weight” if you was “Professor Klump”//(The Nutty Professor) [4]
Kids winning streaks always Revert-and-slow cause his VERSES-“FLOW"//
with the same consistency of a "pregnant" bitch on "BIRTH-CONTROL"// [5]
U don't even “Step Close” there's gotta be “Less Jokes”, I “Wreak Dopes” with “Tecks Folks”//
I just won this battle 5-0, cuz Being on “The Weakest Link” is the only place you'd “Get Votes”// [6]
My-Craft-Teaches, I’ve-Matched-Jesus...not-trying-to-Brag, But-Please-Kid, EnVy “Off The Chain” like “Snatched Pieces!”//
You Cant-Beat-This”, Im’a-Rap-Genus, I Pack-Heat-Shit....with “three life lines” that’s-Half-decent, even “Ask Regis!”// [7]

sorry bout that...

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opening - dominator
flow - dominator...envy ya shyt looked a lil streched
metas - both
multis - both
punches - dominator
wordplay - envy
complexity - dominator
structure - dom...again streched..(this shouldnt b a catagory)
closing - dom

VOTE- DOM.......OVERALL BETTER VERSE
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drop a vote here n make sure to poll.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92259
n vote honestly........1
overall -

Dominator won this to better punches and a more consistent flow. Envy's lines were stretched a lil.

vote= DOMINATOR

Hit this wit an honest vote:

Infinite Skillz vs. TAG-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779

uppin.... ill hit those up when I get home......
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^^^herbish vote infinite skillz


opener(+1)-D
closer(+1)-D
punches(+2)-D
personals(+2)-D
wordplay(+1)-Envy
multis(+1)-Envy
complexity(+1)-D
originality(+1)-D
cornyness(-2)-Envy
enjoyment(+1)-D

Overall- Envy Skillz (0).....Dominator (+9)-------Winner....no hate honest opinion.....

honest vote here please:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92866

follow the outline infinite skillz..........................................

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