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11-21-03, 11:58 PM | #1 | |
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Frightful Love
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Why am i afraid to hold your hand?
I can't help but think something is wrong...like something bad is about to happen. i know it's coming but i keep going and stumble right into it. I can't use the word LOVE as easily as you. It's not just a word that you can say to any random person. It's a feeling that comes deep within the chambers of your heart. I used to say i love you, but now I honestly can't. For you are my greatest joy, my deepest sorrow, and my greatest fear. This is my Frightful Love. Aight tell me what ya think bout this one. -1- |
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11-21-03, 11:59 PM | #2 | |
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I wrote it pretty quickly but put alot of my emotion into it so tell me waht ya think and holla back at me.
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11-22-03, 12:10 AM | #3 | |
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Don't sleep peepz uppin on this
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11-22-03, 12:16 AM | #4 | |
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DAAMN. This was a KICK ASS DROP. Lots of emotion. Not too many guys can write stuff like this. And you certainly put ur heart into this one. Something that I can relate to. I cant say those words unless I mean em, and for most ppl its hard for me to actually mean it. Seems like you would go through anything for this person and like i said, u put madd emotion into it. Great job! Most respect. Keep em comin.
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11-22-03, 12:42 AM | #5 | |
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this was good. kinda short but it was sweet and to the point. Had a meaning and thats what counts. Keep elevating and dropping. Spect JT
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11-22-03, 12:53 AM | #6 | |
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Thx both yall if ya can peep my other stuff imma go peeps everyone elses appreciate the feedback...
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11-22-03, 01:02 AM | #7 | |
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UPPIN on this right here i might be gone for a lil but ill check back lata
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11-22-03, 08:22 AM | #8 | |
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it was short but it packed alot of emotion. you talked about a word alot of people take advantage of. iam feeling it......
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11-22-03, 11:01 AM | #9 | |
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Thx i appreciate the feedback. Uppin on this pome right here dont sleep people.
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11-22-03, 12:29 PM | #10 | ||
Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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this is a pretty good drop man, but i had to tell you u broke the forum rules, your only allowed one poem a day, 1luv.
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11-22-03, 01:07 PM | #11 | |
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O my bad i'll stop then. Thx fortellin me. Uppin
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