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check in...good luck bra..
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aight bra am gonna have to drop tomoz coz i gotta go ........i'll def drop 2moz pz_______________________________________________

Yo B, Its A, And I See How - You Win Battles With The Link To Vote
I Slayed This Kid, & Now Buffy's Jealous - I Didnt Even Need A Post//
Ya Ghost Asleep? Cause Your Weak At Wrotes - Ya Lines Look Leary
Amend Gets More Scare In Books Label'd "THE PINE-CONE THEORY"//
This Mime Dont Hear Me, Kids Backwards - Look At The Fun He Gets
Eaten, Then I Threw Up Phil - And Replace M. Witha ton- Of -Brix//
Like Summer Skipped, I'll Fall Ya Free's - Better Flow An Ocean Kid
Your Like Old Tall Trees, . . .A Mejestic Wonder - . . .NO-ONE NOTICES//
.!
This Faggots Threw, 'Carrie'd Away - & "There All Gonna Laugh At U"
Ya Rap's Rebuked, & Whacha Spat Is Puke - Sick
. . .But Now Amend Dont Hafta Chew//

a clear of example of under elevation from 2002...n Broken Faster..
..for no reason...I merked this bitch like a Ban on Master Blaster
jus like Pasta...it only takes a little Steam to make Amend go Soft..
..this bitch ducked n huddled at the sound of my first Cough...
so Fuck off...i thought Amend was male,till he Followed Thru..
..see i got links on every1,Even my Wakest Verse Beat You
but heres a good Will Gesture..scrap this Account N Start Over.....
w/ your ass dissed by all, you can't Get a Win by The Luck Of A Clover
see I showed Amend what its like...to be Raped and Left to Die...
coz w/ your Votes in the last battle...you still got fuked from 2 to 5

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aight
opener Phil
flow Phil
Structure Tie
punches Phil(those damn links)
Closer Phil

overall Phil

peace

WTF.!?
You gotta be kiddin'
Uppin for votes. . .REAL ones
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plz dont sway no matter wots written...
uppin


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yo, phil m up took this. he had nice wordplay, flow, and punches, amend you came aight, but he out did you.

vote-phil

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Wins
Realest~Rap(5-0)
3%(5-0)
inkwell(5-0)
eminem minis(5-3)
lyrical extasy(5-0)
whiteRwrong(5-0)

1st...w/ polls...pz________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _____________

Amend got this easily. .Everyline was dope apart from the very last one. .The flow was amazingly dope from amend aswell. .I can't believe your voting for Phil. .Geez

Vote-Amend

yo dis battle was extremly close, her is the break down
opener-tie
metas-a
punches-tie
personals-a
wrodplay-tie
structure-phil
closer-phil
enjoyability-a
tie through breakdown, but i was feelin amend a lil more so he gets my vote, fuckin close battle tho, u both got skills..............

yo, can you 2 return the favor and hit up and honest vote on these?
thanks dudes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94506
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94982

Amend-
Yo B, Its A, And I See How - You Win Battles With The Link To Vote
I Slayed This Kid, & Now Buffy's Jealous - I Didnt Even Need A Post//

^^lol...nice opener

Ya Ghost Asleep? Cause Your Weak At Wrotes - Ya Lines Look Leary
Amend Gets More Scare In Books Label'd "THE PINE-CONE THEORY"//

^^hahahaha....

This Mime Dont Hear Me, Kids Backwards - Look At The Fun He Gets
Eaten, Then I Threw Up Phil - And Replace M. Witha ton- Of -Brix//

^^damn...nice personal

Like Summer Skipped, I'll Fall Ya Free's - Better Flow An Ocean Kid
Your Like Old Tall Trees, . . .A Mejestic Wonder - . . .NO-ONE NOTICES//

^^nice...


This Faggots Threw, 'Carrie'd Away - & "There All Gonna Laugh At U"
Ya Rap's Rebuked, & Whacha Spat Is Puke - Sick
. . .But Now Amend Dont Hafta Chew//

^^eh.....decent...

Brix-
a clear of example of under elevation from 2002...n Broken Faster..
..for no reason...I merked this bitch like a Ban on Master Blaster

^kinda played...but decent

jus like Pasta...it only takes a little Steam to make Amend go Soft..
..this bitch ducked n huddled at the sound of my first Cough...

^first line was funny as hell but didn't like the actual punch too much

so Fuck off...i thought Amend was male,till he Followed Thru..
..see i got links on every1,Even my Wakest Verse Beat You

^You don't need to post links....just make a note that the personals are true, no one's loooking up the links anyways lol....but this was a decent personal jab

but heres a good Will Gesture..scrap this Account N Start Over.....
w/ your ass dissed by all, you can't Get a Win by The Luck Of A Clover

^^played, but pretty good

see I showed Amend what its like...to be Raped and Left to Die...
coz w/ your Votes in the last battle...you still got fuked from 2 to 5

^^lmao....this was nice man....

Pretty good battle, one of you had a pretty consistent verse, some played lines, but one really nice one.....The other had a really sick verse, almost each line made me go "ohhhh shit!" so I just gotta go with who had stronger punches/personals, and although this battle was dope I'm gonna give my vote to

Vote=amend

peace....good stuff from both.