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11-25-03, 02:45 PM
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chest plate speech/ keystlye
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Beast on the keys my speech very heated. RaH sufficate u until u need a breathing treatment. Respitory failure put my 13s where you teeth are. Sore like taradacktals with a sound as rough as tree bark. Most MC's dip they toes in but run for land when they see sharks/
Step to Cavern-Men and get your pathetic team's meat carved/ Keystyle Copyright2003 I've got knockers aka beats for sale wyzdom@tmail.com Weak Delivery need not aply |
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11-25-03, 03:38 PM
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You need to leave 3 names or 3 links of peoples you left feedback on or this will be deleted...
But this needs some work....work on your structure keep the lines around the same length and add multies and internals to it...Vocab was ok but it needs work as well...for a keystyle this was ok but it needs work....just keep at it and keep dropping. |
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11-25-03, 04:07 PM
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Banned
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nice shit dogg
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11-25-03, 05:01 PM
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Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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i was feelin this...
structure was horrible vocabulary was ok, could of been better using multies could of helped but i understand this was a keystyle so i won't redicule it too much. just tryin elevate... |
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11-25-03, 05:04 PM
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Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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now how 'bout hitting this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94104 |
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11-25-03, 06:11 PM
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I gave feed back on kemy$t worp perfect and rob d
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