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no bullshit



o ya times come then i'ma say then your gunna say something stupid with this result

iight yo MD....u were tryin out for D.O.I.

well 1liner is in D.O.I.

so if u beat him your in......if not then your not in

i will check this out later.....

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MD-da `Ill-ist- shit more like Skill-less- with a Ego
Cuz ill-spits till i kill-this kid so his Arrival is D.O

(D)ead (O)n when i spit up and Erupt with thunder --
i'm gunna make uwonder if that dirt is a better place to be under
Shots followed wit slumber-and leave uboxed in hollowed lumber

This Wanna be just got ripd in pieces/
Ate em for Lunch - and shot out with Deceased releases
JESUS his remains can still be found in my fecies

AYO... D.O.I. ban this guys he can't even rip a *line*/
lyrical rhymes?~clean my eye's~sick wit what?~ you gotta die//

u say u spit flames when u really have no lyrical skill...
I stabbed lineer brain with a diseased needle~thats why he "thinkin" he "ill"//
son u a small time why u go to wendy's an get a biggie...
when u lick the toliet was the last time u ever was nasty//
*you* think *have* the ability *been*ing even *close* to me... when u still on the *lined* spittin as a first time newbie???...shhhhyyytttt// ( if u don't get this Creatiavty read the words wit the * * around them

lets go...

METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - MD_killa20
STRUCTURE - 1liner
CREATIVITY - tie
PERSONALS - 1liner
OPENING - 1liner
CLOSING - 1liner
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - 1liner

OVERALL – 1liner

Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392

METAPHORES - none
VOCABULARY - none
PUNCHLINES - MD_killa20
STRUCTURE - 1liner
CREATIVITY - more 1liner
PERSONALS - 1liner
OPENING - 1liner
CLOSING - 1liner
MULTIES - none
FLOW - 1liner

OVERALL & VOTE – 1liner

yo MD_killa20 screw there crew come and join my crew MC's'R'US we'll let ya in ours unlike them other bitches makin take one 1liner
and that boi is wack he uses 3 line bars lol. but yet he calls himself 1liner. 1liner my ass

For some odd reason...

i thought

punches...flow...wordplay...creativaty...an some times Vocab won battles.... (so why is 1liner winning?)

oh well... keep upppin

vote on this and I'll return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92602

aiyo dont be dissin one liner...he will murk all of u...so will I

and one liner took this battle easily....
opening - 1liner
punches - MD_killa20
struct- 1liner
personals- 1liner
flow- 1liner
closing- 1liner
overall - 1liner

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yo can u guys check this out ok thanks man


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93798

((((((()))))))))))))))))))((((((((((((((((())))))) )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))(

uppin uppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

upppin............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ........................

ayo, return the fav. buy making a vote in the battle in my sig. hommie. Aight then.

opening - 1liner
punches - MD_killa20
struct- 1liner
personals- 1liner
flow- 1liner
closing- 1liner
overall - 1liner
^Im goin with my hommie on this. Hese write^

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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uppin fo votes .....................plz get this shit closed............................................ .................................................. ...............