I wanna get this done....

15 Bars Max Like ya said
No D/r
No Crew
No Bullshit
12hrs To Post Verse After Both Checkin
Holla at me on aim if ya got any problems wit the rules

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check 1 2 check check... good luck play boi













this issue, if i diss-u its official and i got a silencer on the thing that sounds like a dude who cant whistle//
my bullets scar ur tissue, cuz my delivery is murderous even mail-men carry pistols.
it must be a typographical error is sum 1 is callin u Nice//{haha}
i'l ripp out ur heart just to hold the Origin to ur life. holy christ,punches darken ur lights! like failed edison projects//
i got orgin shook like columbine high gettin bomb threats, from ticked off nerds and a sniper rifle that picks off herbs//
such az ur self i'l put extra holes in u like a fat persons belt,and sorry to say but ur flows a gimmick,u dont want test illness like closed off clinics//{ooo wee}
ur never makin noise ur just a punk that whispers, whos fallin off the polls like a drunken striper//
dont get it wrong ur decent but i throw punches quicker.. got u seeing doubles llike u drunk to much liquor//
but i never admire queers..read my verse and know the fires here, after this battle ur wake will be a BLACk TIE affair!//
along with suits to match no lie u wont survive posting self portraits and nameing it the "Ugliest man alive"//http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=90600&highlight=origin

^^ just check the link.. but yet in text u think..ur better then me? that will never be my shots leave u wit red-skin like a Cherokee//
so lets see how many times u can flip my name, different ways so the punches wont look the same//
matter fact let me do it for this hoe the "nasdaq" is closed, and my crew names lame but so, i'l back it up with wordplay and flow//
and my punches are all in control to break ur nose, shatter ur bones while urs dont connect like broke cellular phones//
so face the facts-then cuz i'm ova this nigga like a slaveship captain,ur punchlines are lame u aint no pranksta dumb kid brought a #2 pencil to test my gangsta//
blows to the chest make ur knees buckle,cuz i aint "fuccin" wit "kids" like a gay couple,u aint touching this sickness liek the boy in the bubble//
willy spit flames hot enough to bake a demon in hell, this is the end of ur season like torn ACL's//
u'l never reach my level so why bother? ur still a junior like being named after ur father,
testin me and get hurt-up i aint talkin hair stlye when i make ur body curl-up//
the force-is the equivalent to a bush in office. drop rap and join the armed-forces like canibus-did..i'm battling a femcee cuz after i'm done u'l be missin a RIB//

Fucka punch ya name shows ya already all over the keyboard
I aint playin..this shits cuttin up fat kids like see-saws
Rapped up like ya king size all ya showin is stretched bars
Me givin tips for ya verses..only way ya gonna take charge
Ya should call my ass Vida how my hotness wreckin this fag
Killin ya styles elementery..just gotta put pen to the pad
I only gotta be droppin one word to be done stoppin ya flow
Dam...its over..looks to me like Jini stole n ate up the show



Im stabbin at ya spinal cord..why ya lines back slashed
This shits gettin ya reactin n ya verse showin up rash
Ya push in so much shit..this bitch relatin with Kartman
I see ya down at wallmart pushin jello sayin ya hardnin
Youz uglier than Word Perfect..ha..look what good he did
Ya could only call me feeble minded cus im avoidin ya sig (His 2 losses are to feeble)
Shootin holes in ya pockets..ya style saves up to be poor
Sucka..this makin ya jaw drop when ya knees hit the floor
Moms called ya special..why ya always throw in the towel
Im jackin ya..even ya pants so ya choked like Simon cowel
If willy got flow im blowin the competition outa the water
Shit.we aint got beef but im still takin this to slaughter
Ya quick to paz..tryin win this witta fake jedi mind trick
I an-nihil-ate this fag till hes runnin for mummy n shit
22?...damn ya been been around since world war 2 n hitler
Ya droppin hare..eminem groupie..run rabbit befo i hit ya
I wreck ya heart..fo bein ova tha limit n drivin punch's
I aint an easy win..no canadian french pussy with hunch's
Fucka line limit..call me yayo how peeps tryina free this
But imma call ya SARS how ya aint reachin old aids illness (Black tie used to be h.i.v)
Ya really like Nasdaq...how ya structure loosin battles
N imma snake ya nigga..leavin this baby witout the rattle

Uppin 1

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up up up and AWAY!!!!!!!!
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This battle was decent...

niether verse really spectacular

O: "Fucka line limit..call me yayo how peeps tryina free this
But imma call ya SARS how ya aint reachin old aids illness"

^^^ only line worth quoting, Nasdaq fix your structure

Vote: Origin


^^^best

And oh yes follow my sig

Uppin number 2.

this is gonna take a while fuckin voters

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There were alot of punches thrown, but only about half of them landed good. Then there is like 15% of those which landed nicely. Willy had a good verse, but it didnt grab my attention. I felt that origin cam harder. It was just all around better to me, not by much. This was a close one...
( this fuckin thing hasnt been letting me vote lately, But this is my thought on the whole thing. sorry if it doesnt work... )

Vote - Origin

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

Polled.
-Axe

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why kids always cry bout my structure? that sum real funny shit just cuz i dont write like all u kids i lose? lol funny shit blah fuck it uppps

uppin 3

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good verses by both.. Willy you structure isnt all that good dawg your lines are to extended shorten them up a little..

punches-origin
personal-tie
flow-tie
structure-origin
wordplay-willy
meta-origin
multie-none maybe i missed them when i read the verses..let me know..
creativity-origin..
overall-origin

good battle ya'll..no hate willy.props to both keep doin ya thang

i dont need to shorten nuffin yall just dont know how to flow it.. its understandble most noobbs dont.. its str8 3-0 holla

opener - o
closer - o
punches - o
personals - o
wordplay - o
vocab - o
ugly structure - willy
overall - o

please help the sleeping and drop honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93220