did i say 8 or 10, i spit ten...


Dao, in excelscious, gay hoe
i don't know you, but i smell fish
could it be, you aint nothin but a bitch
10 an 1, prolly gloat about the herbs you sonned
well im one of the few, that you will not overcome
my record is weak, but certainly not what i speak
i rape metaphors like cheap whores
like i did your head, must be at home, givin me dome, thanksgiving leftovers, suck on my gravy
cause u behind dicks like tracey

com'n dao...time really expiered, but jus spit, fucka time limit also fucka message length fucka bitch, fucka dime i wanna dolalr, dat 100, fucka number

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The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

I only need 8 To Send this Bill Gates To School of Rape
You Late to Class Always so You Can Get punishment on Tape
But he Got Kicked not for tardys But Likin the Hoe'in Trade

You just got jacked of any thought u ever had of thinkin
Suspended from Drinkin cuz ya poisen was "Human Beginings"
Fuckin Sperm Jugger, Only Back He got is of His Gay Lova
Vica Versa, Cuz no one Handles ass like u when you got "someone above ya"

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.

Blah...Vote Goes To DaO
He Merked You Sublime...Your Spit Was Wak...
you just spat wak DaO hit harder incorperated more than wat you did in the way of werdplay...etc
Pz


Vote=DaO

DoA merked this kid easy flow punches creativity personals D took it all..the other kid was lackin a lot...

yo if any1 of ye have time hit u my verse thats in my sig...that'd be apreciated thanks pz

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.

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The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

This is simple...

Opening -Rule
Punches -Rule
Flow - Rule
Vocab - Rule
Allusions - Rule
Closer - Rule
Vote - Rule

Can I say murda? LOL, you had this cat in every way possible hommie. Wasnt your best, but still killed this clown.
-Return the Favor and vote on the battle in ma sig-
( not unless you already have )

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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oops wrong name, thought Rule was doing this... All those votes go to DaO , sorry bout that hommie. Vote - DaO

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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lmao..wow looks like rule has a secret admirer....

neway...DaO took this with no problem....no point in explaining...altho his verse wasn't that good he DID have multis..he DID have flow...and he DID have a couple of decent lines.....the other dude was just all off..needs a lot of work..

vote- DaO
can u hit up my battle with Kaos Theory?

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yo... do me a favor and hit this up and vote 4 my lil cuz..... he kinda fucked my s.n up 4 me

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95721

d20 took this..not a very good battle............................................ .................................................. .......

D took this one, nice punches with the school jokes, and the flow was nice, sublime needs to work on some flow and punch lines... not bad though,,,, one

METAPHORES - ...
VOCABULARY - Sublime D
PUNCHLINES - DªÖ
STRUCTURE - DªÖ
CREATIVITY - DªÖ
PERSONALS - Sublime D
OPENING - DªÖ
CLOSING - DªÖ
MULTIES - ...
FLOW - DªÖ

OVERALL - DªÖ