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Masta C:
Life is something precious something everyone worships..
Things may not seem worth it but in the end they turn out perfect..
Life can be hard but you can over come the rough obstacle…
So many things to choose from its just a tough topical…
Things constantly thrown…right in front of our optics…
And we cant stop it but you can always over come and top it..
The hope never drop it, cause its the only thing that holds together…
For worse or for better you just never give up do you ever?..
No, you cant let go of this precious thing we all have a chance at..
Life is something ya advance at, if ya forget just glance back..

MC Uski:
Life we all have To go Through it We Could Be Murderers Or Cold Blooded Killers..
Walking down cold dark allies and bein scared is normal It is only Lifes Thrillers..
Best Frends Saying Ur A Pussy Cause u Not affraid to Show Your own Tears..
Being Brave Means You’re the Only One That Knows You Worst Nitemares..
U Could Be Snobby And Rich Or U can be Hott And Pretty But a Big ass Bitch..
And Also Have Nothing Goin Your Way all ways Getting Dissed and called a Snitch..
Life has Some Deadly Corners But U gotta Keep Ya Head High And Keep Rhyming….
And Those Corners can Crush a Man And Also Make A Man Keep Climbing…(for the top)
Life can Get So Frustrating and u Getting angry and You Just Fell Like Ya Gonna Explode…
If U Hate Your Life Well Don’t Be stupid and Kill Ya Self Please Don’t Go Down That Road….


This was keyed in like 15 mins..But leave us some feedback on this.

Yea Uppin Yall Looking Fo Some Feed Back On this Aiight Peace Yall

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this was a hot collabo, both you came great, the flow was on point it had some good vocab and a lot of good detail very good read keep it up props to both of you

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Yo uski u elavatin wit yo kolabes kuz, keep it krakin... masta ¢ ni¢e flow dawg, u got mad skills wit makein people think... id give this a 6/10... no offen¢e or nothin but it kuda been betta, iv seen betta from both u... den again diss wazin yo worst, either way keep it krakin yall.

Pea¢e (\1/) 050 5^

i disagree,,,masta you had a ncie flow and structure going....nicedrop..few lil multis thrown in.but....uski....you aint too bad but get rid of the scheme ya got...too simple...rhyming the last word aint what is needed...give it some thought.....keep at it ...pZ

good verses from both

keep up the topical shit

good flow and vocab

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Hey Thanks For The Feedback So Far, Keep The Feedback Coming In, Its Much Appreciated, Thanks.

This collab was dope, flow was on point, and had good imagery. Keep spittin.

That shit was awesome..good collab all around...Kudos to all yalls............................................. .....................

Thanks For The Feedback So Far, Keep The Feedback Coming In, Its Much Appreciated.


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This was a nice Colab. Very good word play from Masta C, and good descriptions by Mc-Uski ( bout the killas and nightmares ).
This was a pretty good drop hommies, Im feeling it. 8 / 10

---> Can you plz return the favor and check the flow in my sig. Im positive you wont be disapointed, aight hommies.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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Masta C, i'll give your piece 9.5/10.... you had some great emotion, you kept consistent multies and internals, and your piece flowed pretty much perfectly throughout the entire read.... great job! the only thing u didnt have that great was vocab, besides "optics" you didnt have much stimulating words... but the rest was great

MC Uski, you had some problems... although your piece was more storylike than Masta C's, the flow went off towards the middle to the end, and u didnt have advanced rhymes like multies and internals... same with the vocab... but your piece was above average... 7/10

9.5/10 + 7/10 = 16.5/20 = 8.25/10

so altogether, you guys make a pretty dope team.. nice work guys and keep dropping

I thought the begging was tight, the end kinda droped off. The flow was nice for both. Keep writting.

Hey Thanks For The Feedback So Far, Keep The Feedback Coming In, Its Much Appreciated, Thanks.

This was good.. I mean the multis was def kicking from masta c.. people don't pay enough attention to them.. yet most people can't do them when their really easy.. There wasn't no quaotable.. The take on this topic was quite basic.. But it turned out above average.. The 'Life' topic is very played.. You pulled little pieces of this off well though..

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