alright again..
10 lines or more
due tomorrow..
house rules
3-0 is KO
first to 5 wins

checkin

check in

heres my verse..

My Verbal skillz are dope and strong I’ll put them in yo ass so deep and dirty it’d be like Oprahs-Thong!//1
You better hurry quick-n-give up my lines are over you so you’d have to swing to hit-up infact you still can’t reach, you ain’t even Old Enough to get-ya-Dick-Up!//2
A gangsta from Canada is like a hick going to new York when they use they’re guns you guys uses a pitch-forks//3
The day you use a noose to hang your body will be the day I’ll bring the dailey news to your fuck up mommy//4
I think I’m not in the right-place this dude is label as a light-weight armed wit pillows when I have fist that might-rage//5

bar 3 he’s from Canada and his name starts with gangsta
bar 5 he’s title is light-weight


g0od luck

Yo...check it...

Ya fakeness Ima expose, ya trash, Ima dispose, befo this battle even started tha case was closed//
Ya see ma name an ya annoyed, tha fact that im ill isn't easy ta avoid, step up, 'n get destroyed//
A "restuaraunt"* from California, I've defeated tha faggots before ya, I am ya death, I enduce ya parinoya//
Befo tha call out I saw ya presence, 'n it wasn' now, it was then when i smashed ya essence//
Smash ya 'till ya face implode, ya fate been told, ya rhymes remindin' me of somethin' from an 8-year old...//

*His occupation in his profile jus' says resturaunt

Sry bout tha wait dawg...gl on tha pollz...

good job you win
verbal


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^^^^^^^^^^Dick Rider
Fuckin' explain ya votes, dickhead. Didn' ya read tha rulz at tha top of Frontlines? Explain ya votez!

GANGSTAONE it was a hate vote....He gonna get banned
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Shi', u righ' dawg...i hope tha' mo' fucka does get BANNED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol wasnt the best battle but...
Breakdown--
Punches-G.O
Flow-None
Sustainment-G.O
Structure-None
Metas-G.O
Overall-G.O..
both ya'll sort ya structure plz..props tho pz

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP...BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97712

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

A'ight thx dawg uppin(1)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Uppin(2)This bein slept on^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Bein' Slept on hardcore....Uppin'(3)^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^

gangster one overpowered this...like BI sed the structure was kinda weird

but vote-g1....

can u hit this up please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97748

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97748

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97748

A'ight, thx dawg, too abd ya can' poll vote.............................................. .................................................. ...

Oh, 'n try ta make ya explanations longer too................don' wan' any trouble wit tha mods.............................................. ...................

this was a pretty weak battle i thought. but Gangsta took this one, his was harder hittin,... didnt like the way you's set it out, ...why?.......
punches=gangsta
flow=gangsta(just)
structure=tie
metas=gangsta(weak)
wordplay=gangsta
creativity=tie
opener=gangsta
closer=gangsta

vote=gangsta, both could be improved.....pZ