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Old 12-10-03, 07:50 PM   #1
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dropped replys to
skiddz
aisle 5 and some other dudes shit
and jimmyripper


exempt from contempt i rip souls and bodies get condensed
break ya defence, my rhymes take lives with deadly content
let me vent, im hell sent with the rawest of purpose
through my exertions ill bring more heat like *c to f* conversions
me and my insurgents,will tear you of your physical
with the residual occurence of these abominable rituals
im phenominal and somewhat biblical, ancient in many ways
bring knowledge like a college and smile whenever my mind spray
my brain devestates, when i contemplate i seem to desecrate
with intentions intent on breaking down all that you create
mc's dissipate, im giving words a new meaning of danger
they make you holy and weak like baby jesus in the manger
im quick to anger, lone ranger on the prowl
contagiously ill, yall feel me in your bowels
my language foul, a dark dialect of this beast rhythm
styles shine in different lights like reflections of a prism
make incisions in times fabric, causes mental static
an erratic savage live and breathe of the tragic
emotions that your emotin', feral and potent
hack into your body, just to glimpse all the components
but i've always been there, you've always known it
im you, your me, your devotions set free
truth bears witness your sacred alimony
to expunge all the guild, let loose with your soul
and let splitsoul get the wheel under his controll


oh yea... fooled ya, yall thought it was gonna be serious....
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Old 12-10-03, 09:53 PM   #2
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good to see you still got your flair for attention grabing and percise skillz.....you came ll in here with wordplay and twisting the subject matter....all and all this was illness all the way.
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Old 12-10-03, 10:02 PM   #3
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I was definately feelin the flow in this piece some real hot internals but i did feel the content was lacking any real thickness. The rhyme scheme was very nice very smooth as far as a repetitive rhythm to it. overall this was a decent read
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Old 12-10-03, 10:44 PM   #4
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Yeah i agree this was a pretty good piece here....enjoyed the read...flow in this was real good, stayed on point through out it and didnt really get off....you had some good internals in this, liked that...vocab was pretty nice in here too...overall good piece..keep at it.
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Old 12-10-03, 11:29 PM   #5
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it was a ight piece flow and vocab was ight wordplay ok punches ight multi's ok over all 6.9/10
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