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SS Verse: Historical Moment
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Look Down At Your Wrist, Your Watch Is Spinning Backwards
Grey Hair Turns To Color, And In Reverse Fly Black Birds Reappearing Buffalo Heards, Back In The Land Before Time Life Goes From Old To Young, Like You're Holding Down Rewind The World Was Refined, No Pollution Was Yet Known The Air And Water Were Clean, With No Holes In The O-Zone And Everything Was Home Grown, When People Had Morals And Kids Werent Getting Shot, Over Silly Turf Quarrels Listen To The Chorals, They Sung Because They Believed They Never Questioned Faith, It Was All They Could Conceive And They Didnt Grieve, Never Was A Tear Wiped On A Sleeve They Percieved Death As A Step, To No Longer Being Niave Then On A Midsummer's Eve, Somebody Questioned Perfection Gathered A Collection, And Then Promised Them Protection All They Had To Do, Was Follow A Few Guide Lines For Life Promised Bliss After Death, But He Had Lied To Minds Alike So They Took A Hike, Over A Desert For Three-Hundered Years Never Questioned His Ambition, Never Did They Shed A Tear They Never Felt Alone Or Fear, Only Felt A Great Hope Even When Life Was Rolling, It Had Been Perched Atop A Slope Started To Slip Away Like Soap, Drowning Like A Sinking Boat Untill The Day, They Had Been Givin What They Asked For They Rushed Into A Belief, When It Really Was A Masked Door They Stepped Through The Opening, Expecting To Find Bliss Wandering For 300 Years, Made People Forget They Exist And Now They Arent Missed, A New World Has Unfolded While There Was No God Present, The World Had Been Molded Nobody Was Scolded, The Earth Took A Leap And Passed Peace Cause Now Instead Of Fair Justice, You Get Beat By Police Violence Increased, People Only Cared For Themselves The Only Place The Bible Is Worth Anything Now, Is On Bookstore Shelfs ------------------------------ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=982107 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=982108 |
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I checked this out and voted on it... I was really feeling this hommie. You used your vocab, and your topic very well. The flow was consistant, and rhyme scheme was good. This was a nice drop, hope you win the battle in the SS league...
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this was dope man...what more can i say everythin was good in it you didnt really lack anything..im sure ulll beat ur opponent with this unless its superman LOL
Pz man and keep up the good work P.S= keep shakin that ass....
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This was very good, indepth, the flow was onpoint throughtout, maybe a few more multis, but the meaning behing this was fantastic, i hope you do win the SS battle, Pz
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thought the concept was good and no complaints in its execution.....damn tight verse...good luck with it......pZ......
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IP:
just a question... where in the hell was you when you wrote this??? a time machine? dunno... but yo fa ish was real ... i liked this read ... like you got ya future on ya heart... nice spit dunny
keep goin ya thang... never stop elevating... Caesar On3 |
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IP:
Pretty cool. What's with people dissing religion. Are all of you athiests? I think it's a good topic though.
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