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Bugz-Bunny |
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5 | 100.00% |
Wrapp3d G1ft |
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0 | 0% |
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ComPleX To Much To Handle
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Bugz-Bunny vs. Wrapp3d G1ft
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15 lines max
no hate dr crew feeding biting none of that shit i'll spit soon |
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ComPleX To Much To Handle
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Checkin In.....
Checkin In..... Checkin In..... Checkin In..... Checkin In..... Checkin In..... Checkin In..... Checkin In..... Checkin In..... |
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ComPleX To Much To Handle
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IP:
mods can u close this? this nigga gonna no show
.......................................... Pussy Pussy Pussy |
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IP:
checkin in.... sorry i had things to do today.... I don't no show....
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IP:
kid thinks he has the 'gift of rap' but hes wack as shit// n he gotta have a 'virus' for his rhymes to be 'sick'// i wus feelin you for a minute there i have to admit// but comparing 'you to me' is like comparin 'punches to hits'// when you battle punches come harder then stupid fukin kicks// this aint 'karate' this is the 'marshall(martial) art of spits'//* from the look on your face i know your 'not ready yet'// n i wouldnt try to rhyme cauz i just 'murdered the alphabet'// I live in philly at least im proud of where i come from//** cauz im not from the land of 'sadam the dirty bum'// n as of now im bout to make your muthe fukin record 0-2// your so whack even if you 'caught the west nile' i still no cats iller than you//*** Closer __________________________________________________ __ after i lyricaly 'kill' you, you wont have to 'live' in fear// i just murdered my christmas present, i guess i wus bad this year//**** k yo i thought this was an ok verse not my best.... martial arts is karate, and marshall is marshall mathers or eminem.... **i doesnt tell you where he is from ***the west nile is a virus or 'illness' ****his names wrapped gift so its 'present' as in gift.... Eays enuff right!?
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ComPleX To Much To Handle
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IP:
I spit fire and flame, just try to refrain, note that Im gonna bake you...
They should call you childrens Advil cause my little brother could take you... Calln me pussy...wen ur more "beat" than a cheap slut/ Dawg it sounds like ya rymes go in frum ya mouth n out ya butt... i sufocate ya flow, Have you spittin salivia.. I light up ya mouf but u still aint blazin fia...(fire) Ya wack...u waste of G1fts tyme u needa hit up boot-camp... N ya cant do it, like a wheel chair facialty wit outta ramp.. |
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IP:
yo wrapped gift had this joint, like baby advil my little brother could take you, lmao, ahhahahahaha
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IP:
uppin 1 lmao high definition you need to explain ur vote even if u cant poll it asshole dont freeepost ThanX Uppin1
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IP:
bugz took this battle with better flow,and sturcture. wrapp u did have that sic advil line but one line can't win it for ya.....
my vote...bugz vote on this battle................................. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98116 |
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Hooked
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IP:
ite ,
rite this is how i saw this, flow=buzz structure=bugz punches=gift personals=bugz enjoyment=tie creativity=tie close shit but bugz got this. put an honest vote on this now as i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3126#post993126 ..................................pz |
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Breakdown:
Punches: Bugz Flow: Bugz Creativty: Bugz Vocab: Niether Enjoyment: Bugz Opener: Bugz Closer: Bugz Personals: Bugz Overall: Bugz One sided as fuck...a'ight battle, Bugz got some skillz... Plz, plz, plz, hit this up, dawgz...bein slept on hardcore...thx... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3165#post993165 |
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Hooked
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IP:
cmon man i took the time rite this is how i saw this,
flow=high structure=tie punches=high(fucking insane lol) personals=high enjoyment=high creativity=tie good shit pro try include more personals, put an honest vote on this now as i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3126#post993126 ..................................pz ..................pz |
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punches:both (kinda played)
personals:bugz inched this one out flow:gift structure:bugz meta4's:tie creativity:bugz overall:bugz (both need to keep elevatin)
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Hooked
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IP:
^soz man wrng battle.lol ne way vote on my shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3126#post993126 .thx...........pz
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Veteran
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IP:
I'm a give this to Bugz for a more balanced attack.
Wrapped came fucking nice, really nice in that opener... Then completely fell apart. It almost looks like the 2 opening lines were written for him, then he took over the rest... And fucked it all up. Seriously, the structure is even different. He's got those two almost perfect lines... Then everything after it is simple and filled with, ", /, and () bullshit. Anyway... Steady, decent punches from Bugz, decent wordplay, decent flow. Nothing amazing, in fact he needs ta elevate... But he kept it comin with the shots and flow. KILL THE COLORING OF FONTS, THOUGH! Bugz Holla back...
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