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12-21-03, 07:22 PM
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liked this piece....straight flow.. vocab a lil weak...but some was nice...seemed to have a nice scheme going... yeah...quite liked this.....pZ
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12-21-03, 08:08 PM
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Nice piece..As a whole, like Realist said, you were very good with the concept. You do need to expand on your vocabulary, but thats aight for what it is. I was feeling this piece, you just had a few minor weaknesses.
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