i read your 'RELIGIOUS~RIGHTS'~i spit 'KNOWLEDGE' and im 'AIMIN'~AT~YOU'//
ill turn you in~to~a 'VEDA'~make~you~confused like a 'HINDU'~spittin'~'HEBREW'//
then 'READ~THRU'~see how much i can understand~of~your~'PHILOSOPHY'//
make~and~'DISIPLIN'~you~through~'MY~TEACHING~OF~HI P-HOPGRAPHY'//
your~lost~in~my~'THESIS'...like~'GEORGE.W.BUSH~TRY ING~TO~READ~A~ENVOROMENTAL~TREATY'//
your 'BELIEF~IN~RHYME~WILL~NEVER~DEFEAT~ME' so~try~and~'FUEL'~your~verse~by~eating~some~'PEATY '//
im 'HEATED'~like~'BIGGIE~AND~PAC~ROCKIN'~IN~A~GUNSMIT HS'//
if~your~'MOUTHS~YOUR~GUN~YOU~SPITTIN'~BLANKS'...yo u better get it 'REPAIRED~QUICK'//
my~'MAGS~HOLDIN'~VERBS~TO~SMASH~ALL~YOU~HERBS'//
an~kids~from~the~suburbs~who~never~had~there~mouth s~to~the~curb//
i leave you 'ST~ST~ST~STUTTERING' in your battle attire~cos'~when~i~blow~i~dont~misfire//
you'll be like "man~this~battle~is~fire" leave you burnt like~'KAYNE~WEST~WITH~A~HOT~WIRE'//
this aint aimed at any 'KATS' specifically~just~all~of~you~in~general//
this~might~make~you~'BLEED'~but~y'all~dont~need~to ~get~all~'MENSTRUAL'//

crits plz

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bumpin' up.........................................crits plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Lmao

That was annoying i aint gonna read..

But follow the rules! ..else this will be closed = )

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Fuck you

erm............i read the rules was it the one line reply?????
im gonna talk shit for a bit so it aint one line....have a merry christmas and a happy new year!!!

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i get cha....the three posts....i read the rules but it aint sayin' every time you start a thread.....never mind...

i cant seem to post the links but...

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WORD~PERFECT

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This was ok....your structure could use some work, your lines are stretched out, try to shorten them down a bit so its structured good and so it helps the flow out....vocab in this was ok, could be up'd though....but overall this was ok...keep at it.