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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Criticize22 2 28.57%
Yu Bin SunD 5 71.43%
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Old 12-29-03, 11:40 PM   #16
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Re: Criticize22 vrs Yu Bin Sund

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Originally posted by Yu Bin SunD
10 line max

u know rules

u drop first

good luck


well noone followed the rules

but here

yu bin
had more personals pounches was tight
no structure which made the flow not flow
but so was crit
you also had originality


crit
you could use more elevating
no structure
ok pouches


overall vote yu bin


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Old 12-29-03, 11:41 PM   #17
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u gay man lol hahahaha
 
Old 12-29-03, 11:47 PM   #18
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Yo....
Critisize... You been sonned!
Lopsided battle fella's... You been sonned won with better structure wordplay and the whole monte!
Sorry critisize but you just got wrecked kid. Find a newb huh?
 
Old 12-29-03, 11:49 PM   #19
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Yu Bin:nice punches, had the opener and closer,and his flow was good,had more personals.

Criticize:ur flow was kinda off,that beef -vegaterian line is played,
the rest of ur spit was dope,had good diises.


Vote:Yu Bin...more original and stronger punches
 
Old 12-29-03, 11:53 PM   #20
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since i took time to vote on yours take time to vote on dis its 4-2 me thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101672
 
Old 12-29-03, 11:56 PM   #21
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That was a cool battle a little short though
On the real... line for line i give it to criticize he was more cogent
Both of the flows was a bit off but i know personally its hard changing to fit the rap flow
 
Old 12-29-03, 11:57 PM   #22
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thanks nam
 
Old 12-30-03, 12:20 AM   #23
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well, this was a close battle in my opinion. crit has some disses tho no multis and the flow was off. i still say he had it. but this was very VERY close. yu bin had a good opener but not as good in what i saw. good job both. crit, u need to elevate, but that battle was close.
 
Old 12-30-03, 02:40 PM   #24
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lol this was on of my wackest battles didn't try o welll keep votes comin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............uppin 2
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Old 12-30-03, 03:38 PM   #25
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Old 12-30-03, 03:44 PM   #26
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yu took this in every catagory..........flow punches metas.....structure was the onlt thing u took criticize cos yu's lines were abit stretched.....gud battle but yu takes this easy!

vote-yu

will ya vote on my battle wiv goofy in front lines (1st page) honest vote plz.....thanx.....hit the poll!
 
Old 12-30-03, 04:08 PM   #27
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Old 12-30-03, 06:57 PM   #28
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Old 12-30-03, 07:07 PM   #29
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ok blah blah blah, decent battle, sund, you went easy on em and still murked him. you had punches that were better along with flow. yoou both had not to great of structure. criteicize u needa elevate b4 u try and get vet respect k? you had structure by a little and thats it.

vote- yu bin sund

everyone hit htis up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=killer
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Old 12-30-03, 07:40 PM   #30
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aight the win is as follows

Yu-flow was better than 22
yu-had more personals that hit harder than 22
yu-had better punches that rocked 22's jaw
yu"s-made me laugh more

favorite line in the battle goes 2?????????? Yu
Why Did U Even Shoot At This Vet..
Ur 13 Can't Rap And If You Lookin For GirlS Here Sorry U Ain't Hit Puberty Yet..
Ya Punches Are Like Elton John's Fights...They Never Land Straight..
This Kid Is A LightWeight......Who Knows Wat This Man Ate..


hot shit -----------22 u will eentually get the hang of it
 
 


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