all i do is cause trouble at school
what am i gonna do when the teachers take me as a fool
dammit whole class thinks i'm cool
now this teachers taking away my respect and my drools
how am i gonna write my raps without any skills
homies and playas think i take drugs and pills
no time for those G's i have to climb the rap hill

school work all day no hang outs
study hard withut any doubts
i'm a human being i have ups and downs
sometimes the principal take me as a clown
cuz i'm fucken brown

chorus:is like a dream walking around with books in my hands
trying to figure out who's gonna help me out and who i'm gonna depend around
all i see and hear is knowledge its blurring in my fucken ears it's surrounded
school sucks i wish i was fucken grounded

students everywhere talking and walking
you see this faces everyday it feels like stalking
friends pushing eachother and mocking
teachers teaching without any stoppings
i'm sick and tired of it i need some smoking
i aint a drug addict so i was just joking

subjects changing every period
sometimes in the school grounds i see some syringes
they keep running by dont they know that its dangerous?

chorus2x

bit of a played topic...most feel that way when going thru school.... handled it ok...seen better...mainly id say improve the scheme...use some multis n word play....it will help the feel of the drop and the flow....but ok i suppose...pz....
......return the favour.......

never rap about school again..........topic is wack as hell.........but uhh, the structure was pretty simple............rhyme scheme was ok..........vocab was basic..........overall this was a pretty basic drop........keep postin and elevatin homie.........

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..I'm not feeling this piece at all..the whole flow was very weak..your vocab was below average...your wordplay was 3rd grade level...other than that..^^

You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

Lol Decent And Kina Played But True....

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wut u sed was tru bout school n shit........but i think its a weak topic.......try spittin bout sumthin else.......the vocab was weak.......but jus keep droppin......GOOD LUCK! ~1~

all that was true.could of put more punches tho.but it was good i liked it.

not bad........u gon hear a lot of peeps tellin u 2 make it mo complex ...but hey, u gotta crawl b4 u can walk
keep elevatin
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it wasnt great . But it wasnt to bad. Just very simple, and not deep enough. Keep doing your shit and youll get there

Not really feeling this peice at all.. try a new topic.. nobody realy wants to read about school sucks.. sorry

ohh and you need to add 3 links to 3 previous battles you have read other wise this thread will get closed

Peace

ya everyboddy hates school u need to elevate more ur flow wasnt very good eitha


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102814 drop an honest vote on this

school sucks-and so does this drop

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..