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LOL@ BITING MY OLD NICK.............................................. .................................................. ..........just with a k
Justin-credible

the fuck?

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nigguh, ill have this bitch made nigguh Jay B flea when my gunz shown//
im gunna send this dude back where hes from; the unknown//
i got the mack and all, beat u in a sec wit these shots that im dissin//
aint talkin basketball when i give this guy a "tech" and his "shots" are still missin//
now listen Inversry; quit free postin, ill bag u like groceries//
u couldnt get bit off if ya ass was fresh poultry//

thats 6 uppin for ur verse yo...................
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Inversry i never hurd of ya daug i diddnt bite off shit i got the idea from a old wrestler from WCW and thats prolly where u got it from MARK ASS BITCH, quit free postin. Q: real quick
how u got almost 1700 post and a record of 0-0????
u couldnt be copied off if u was a zerox machine...

theres a 10 line minimum yo................................................ .................................................. ..............

six lines max "yo" read the fuckin rules and quit free postin punk asses.......................
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Just Check This Real Quick.... 6 Lines...

..Ill Bust And Slice Ya 'Flesh-Open'.. Like Kids Being Blazed With 'Fire-And-Flames'..||
..Like Burning Notebooks My 'Text-Is-Smokin'.. Ya Don't Express Ya Alias So 'Retire-Ya-Name'..||

..Ya Can't Overcome Me If Ya 'Quote-My-Lines'.. Ya Not Speakin Like I Striked Ya 'Throat-With-Nines'..||
..My Verse = Straight Illness An Peeps Will 'Vote-On-Mine'.. Ya Can't Advance If Ya 'Coat-Ya-Rhymes'..||

..This Faggot 'Sticks-To-Balls' Like A 'Baller'.. And If BasketBall Is Rapping Hes Not 'Making-This-Shot'..||
..Like Hobo's Boxin This Was A 'Quick-Brawl'.. Ill Jab Ya With Knifes And Have Ya 'Aching-In-Spots'..||


Something Quick... To Rip This Kid...
Personals... He Says Hes A Baller...

tyte verse yo uppin
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Jay b got this in all categories , eeeeeeeeeeeenuff said.

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..This Faggot 'Sticks-To-Balls' Like A 'Baller'.. And If BasketBall Is Rapping Hes Not 'Making-This-Shot'..||
..Like Hobo's Boxin This Was A 'Quick-Brawl'.. Ill Jab Ya With Knifes And Have Ya 'Aching-In-Spots'..||

yep this line killed it

gotta give this 2 JB

gotta give this to JB his shit hit harder and had better rhymes, Justin your shit was good but i have to go for JB on this
drop some honest vots on my battles

peace

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Justin:

Flow - ur flow was really good it was betta than Jay B... ur structure was pretty good aswell

Punches - u didn't have that many... but the ones u had didn't really hit hard...
aint talkin basketball when i give this guy a "tech" and his "shots" are still missin//
that was sorta weak...

Personals - i would say ur personals were pretty good hit pretty hard... one of ur best points in dis battle...
now listen Inversry; quit free postin, ill bag u like groceries//
u couldnt get bit off if ya ass was fresh poultry//
those were good personals...

Vocab - i would say u got average vocab... cuz the words u used were pretty basic

Originality - i would say 2 or 3 of ur lines were original the others were pretty basic, but played out good... overall 7.5/10

begining and end:
yo started strong and ended strong but the main probublem was that there wern't enough punchlines and the ones u had didn't hit hard enough... also in the middle u fell apart but then at the end u pulled it 2 gether...


Jay B:

Flow - i would say ur ryhmes flowed but not as good as justin's... structure was good aswell but try 2 make ur words ryhme more...

Punches - almost every line had a punchline that would knock justin off his feet... this was by far ur best point in the battle...
..This Faggot 'Sticks-To-Balls' Like A 'Baller'.. And If BasketBall Is Rapping Hes Not 'Making-This-Shot'..||
..Like Hobo's Boxin This Was A 'Quick-Brawl'.. Ill Jab Ya With Knifes And Have Ya 'Aching-In-Spots'..||
those were ur best punchlines and they hit really hard...

Personals - had a couple but just like ur punchlines hit increadably hard... especially
..Ya Can't Overcome Me If Ya 'Quote-My-Lines'.. Ya Not Speakin Like I Striked Ya 'Throat-With-Nines'..||
..My Verse = Straight Illness An Peeps Will 'Vote-On-Mine'.. Ya Can't Advance If Ya 'Coat-Ya-Rhymes'..||

Vocab - vocab was pretty complex... ur usage of words was pretty good... but some times a couple of ur words didn't ryhme...

Originality - most of ur lines were original around 4-5 of them were... and all of which were well played out... overall 9/10

Begging and End: Started strong and stayed strong though out...

Winner: Jay B
because he had more punchlines and personals and all of them hit alot harder... i thought this line won him the battle...
..Ya Can't Overcome Me If Ya 'Quote-My-Lines'.. Ya Not Speakin Like I Striked Ya 'Throat-With-Nines'..||
also he had a much more complex vocab

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