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01-10-04, 10:51 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Some fucking crazy ass shit !~~~!~~~!!~~~
IP: D0CB 44B2
Growin' up in the hood, surrounded by "crack fiend's"//
fake friends and drug addicts, bowls with "packed greens"// lookin up above puzzled, cold streets got me to "act mean"// with hate for the planet, hate for life and "hatin' my self"// Slangin' for minimum wealth, "under estimatin' my health"// lookin' in the mirror lost, i dunno "who i am"// livin' life in slow mo, if i had a chance ill "go if i can"// wit rox and "blow in my hand" "growin slow as a man"// rappin's a future i can make it i just "kno that can"// homies askin (R u ready?) but i tell em "i dunno if i am// ima nervous break down only "god knows that i am"// always ready, with both hands on the 9 like a "Quarter to Ten"// SMile now cry Later, im a diamond in da dirt above all, im 'greater'// cause i don't trust shit but my gun and the bullets in da 'chamber'// everynight i speak to the "savior", but he dont anwser my "prayers"// so my hip stay strapped wit guns, and my hands on the "Razors"// this "survival is nature" rollin blunts usin' "bible as papers"// and it seems that the "Struggles raises" and we just known as "trouble makers"// they don't see this is what they made us, im jus 1 of the million s of the "cycle's faces!"//
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01-10-04, 11:00 PM | #2 | |||||||
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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=105711
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...124#post1075124 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...130#post1075130
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"The Legion" takes no prisoners! I can be nice but dont make me mad....cause when I loose control.......your dead !! my site:http://freestyleman.proboards25.com/index.cgi |
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01-10-04, 11:05 PM | #3 | ||||||
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nice man, good flow n i especially liked this part
ima nervous break down only "god knows that i am"// always ready, with both hands on the 9 like a "Quarter to Ten"// |
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01-10-04, 11:53 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: D0CB 44B2
need feedback thanx homie
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"The Legion" takes no prisoners! I can be nice but dont make me mad....cause when I loose control.......your dead !! my site:http://freestyleman.proboards25.com/index.cgi |
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01-11-04, 12:29 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: D0CB 44B2
yo still wouldnt mind some feedback on this motha fucka
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01-11-04, 03:41 PM | #6 | ||||
Word.
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IP: DD10 0DFF
This was alright i thought.....your structure was ok....just watch some of the lines length they were kinda stretched out on some of the lines though.....flow was alright in this.....you had some nice multies...overall a alright piece...keep at it.
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