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01-12-04, 03:20 PM
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when the boredom kicks in!!!
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[url=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=106211lyrics g, warm up
[url=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=106224liba dee, multi madness [url=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=106183west, fears i watch through my cig smoke, using my eyes, contemplating susicide, pondering my demise, but from beyond what lies, death in the skies, i've had too many tries, at a bleek, failing life, if offered one more reprise.............. .....would i take it, or again shun evil's diguise, false hope cries, thinking back about the lies, i seem to realize, things that shock an surprise, asking my self.. no replies, my mind denies, cant do nothin as my pity multiplies...... as i near the end, my cigerette, smoke dies, nice short, and easy to reply to, so reply!!!
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01-12-04, 06:20 PM
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thought it was quit basic sounding, jus with the way you rhymed it.... but the content was good ...l liked that.... seems like your one depresed kid...lol.....pZ....
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01-13-04, 02:57 AM
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lol, i will be if no 1 replys to my open mic!!!!
uppin!!
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01-14-04, 02:26 AM
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uppin for some feedback??????????????????????
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01-14-04, 04:00 PM
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damn y'all is sleepin!!!
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01-15-04, 02:58 AM
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any feedback at all..............................
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01-15-04, 11:48 AM
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and again............................
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01-15-04, 01:43 PM
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i should of called it look at me 20 odd times an sleep on me!!!!
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01-15-04, 06:34 PM
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for fucks sake......... drop a link an i will reply to urs
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01-15-04, 07:08 PM
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should of called it look at me 20 odd times an sleep on me!!!!
Could've been re-worded better..but strong message..ok vocab.. i watch through my cig smoke, using my eyes, contemplating susicide, pondering my demise, but from beyond what lies, death in the skies, i've had too many tries, at a bleek, failing life, if offered one more reprise.............. .....would i take it, or again shun evil's diguise, false hope cries, thinking back about the lies, i seem to realize, things that shock an surprise, asking my self.. no replies, my mind denies, cant do nothin as my pity multiplies...... as i near the end, my cigerette, smoke dies, Dont do it! lol..pretty good..nice sharp..clear message, Nice vocabulairy nice little read.. try to expand &.. advance your pieces though..but this was ok. |
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